Reviews for Shadow of Darkness

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Binary Love 2006-04-10 ch 1,	abuseI have the worst habit of forgetting to review when I finish reading an entire story, so I figured I would do it after one chapter, just in case I don't later on. I'm loving this story already. The characters seem spot on and the fact that it's so well written just adds to it. I love how your Gippal has a bit more edge to his wit than he's usually written, all the while staying IC. In a lot of fics, he seems too playful and childish and it draws away from the fact that he has to be at least somewhat serious and well-rounded in order to successfully run the Faction. That first trip to Djose, in the game, if you choose "Fooled you" when he asks if you really want to dig, another side of him comes out in response and you managed to perfectly combine that side of him with the well-known, charming joker side. Now I'm babbling. Anyways! Wonderful job and I can't wait to continue reading!
She's Happy2bHardcore 2005-11-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis fic looks amazing so far! Can't wait to read the rest.
Jedi Kacee 2005-09-21 ch 19,	abuseThree cheers for this story! Very entertaining. And as a bonus you seem to have made it through at least some remedial grammar classed. Most of the fics on this site are almost painful to read because of the horrible spelling and grammar. Your fic was delightful!
Jedi Kacee 2005-09-21 ch 6,	abuseGippal without clothes is such a good idea...
Jedi Kacee 2005-09-21 ch 5,	abuseI am STILL giggling over this chapter. The Pointer Finger of Dispair? That is just fabulous! I'll just be going to read the other chapters now!
Fanfic-Lover 2005-09-13 ch 19,	abuseAh, I guess she didn't...haha...funny how she really does end up becoming his secretary...haha...it was really enjoyable!! I liked it a lot!
Fanfic-Lover 2005-09-13 ch 18,	abuseI liked the fight scene very much!! I could see the two fighting each within my head almost like a movie!! Wo...haha...anyways, don't tell me that Rikku blocked Effram?!
Retah 2005-08-16 ch 19,	abuseI like this story. I like the way Gippal and Rikku act. They are so... man I dunno the word to describe. Casual, I guess.. Anyways, I like it. I like how they kicked the bad guy's . I mean, other 'Rikku-save-the-world' stories I have read have crappy bad-guy--kicking scene. I mean, this has action. Others make it look 'turn based' or resolve to talkin. Like wtf. 'Dude, put the gun down, let's just talk.' -.- And I like the way you took Yuna out... I don't hate Yuna... it's just she had two games full of her ** so... yea. Lol anyways, so yeah. I like this story. I think I said that about 3 times now... and yeah. sorry, i sound so stupid. I can't write properly when I review good fics. Seriously.
2-RavenD 2005-08-16 ch 19,	abuseI really enjoyed this story. Please keep up the good work.
bluetinkerbell 2005-08-08 ch 19,	abuseSorry for the late review! Was on holiday... Lovely last chapter! And I wouldn't mind seeing Rikku take up that job with Gippal...would make it quite interesting... ^.^
1FRICKENgirl 2005-08-01 ch 19,	abuseYES! aw, im so happy you decided to write a sequel. i absolutely cannot wait. as for this chapter, i felt that it was a bit of a rushed ending for such a spectacular story. the beginning part especially, when effram's actions was explained and the reactions of people's gratitude towards her. but whatever. its probably just me and its okay, loved it stills. and i cant believe u actually broguht back that secretary thing haha. looking forward to the sequel!
Xtreme Nuisance 2005-07-31 ch 19,	abuseholy crap, yes. That ending was great. Though, right now, I am unnaturally dizzy. Probably from staring at this computer screen. ^^; right then. PEACE. (I WAS RIGHT! HA! I DESERVE A MINT OREO COOKIE! :P)
Xtreme Nuisance 2005-07-31 ch 16,	abuseblah. I FINALLY FIGURED IT OUT! The fiend and Gippal scene... LotR. Ha. Horns and all. And if not, HA. Lovin it. :) Right then. I THINK THE BADDIE IS EFFRAM! :) :) :)
Fullmetal Fool 2005-07-28 ch 19,	abuseThis story was awesome! I luv Rikku/Gippal,they are totally made for each other!
Canada Eh 2005-07-28 ch 19,	abuseFreakin best chapter EVER! I think you tie with Black Eyed Mistress for my favorite author. The ending was perfect, and, might I add, not many people can do that without making it super mushy. You two have that amazing talent with stories! I can't wait for the sequel and I shall eagerly be checking my fav. author's list all the time!! ROCK ON!

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