O la la! That was very good, and I don't read many FinalFantasy fics, so that's saying something _

Continue please, update, I don't care what you want to call it, just gimme anther chapter!

SharinganMaster

er...well, i can't say much yet, seein' as i have to figure out who rion is. pretty good thus far. too short, i guess, but i can't say anything. most of mine are EXTREMELY short! _;;

oh well, *sigh* write more!

Great story. At least I'm not the only one who does this kinda stuff in class. You didn't happen to have Mr. Rickard for biology did you?