It was pretty good,but where did the story start?

oh this is so sweet Tamahome wo ai ni *.* what a hotty you are when you are dark *.* i hope you will make more fic of miaka and tama-baby^^

AUGH! YOU'RE A GENIUS!! THAT WAS AMAZING!

Absolute fluffy goodness! Although, I do have to point out one thing...

How was Chirinko able to read the calendar entries if they were in Japanese? He should only be able to read Chinese (Though with his intellect, I suppose he could have figured it out).

Aww, that was such a lot of fluffly goodness. I adored it and your writing was beautiful! Love, Love, Love

...why do the people use konan instead of hong nan?? i mean i know it doesnt really matter but it disturbs me somewhat..

Hahaha, it was a cute story. And you wrote the dialogue so well!

This is so cute!! =) I love how you don't have to use 'whoever said, whoever replied' and things like such to tell who's speaking! I think it's pretty clever of you =)

Hello,

I happened to stumble across this story during a search for another fic, and I'm so glad I did! I love to read dialogue driven fics, but there aren't many people that write them; of those that do, few write the dialogue as well as you do. Everything flowed so naturally, it was like listening to a real conversation.

In addition, you definitely succeeded in depicting this scenario from the 'unseen' pov! As I was reading, I felt as if I were standing alongside Miaka with my ear pressed up to the door. ^_^ You also did an excellent job of characterizing the seishi through dialogue; not only that, you wrote it very cleverly, making it completely clear who was speaking without having to resort to the use of narrative markers.

I loved the idea of Chiriko figuring out when Miaka's birthday. It brought a neglected character into the story in a sweet (if abstract) way.

No constructive criticisms, save for having noticed a couple of minor punctuation errors (missing commas).

This story is going on my favorites list...thank you for a very enjoyable read!

best wishes,
KittyLynne :)

P.S. Chocolate sauce and broccoli? Sounds like a Freudian dream...LOL

KAWAII! SO CUTE! I love it!

Kawaii! I love ficcies that display Tasuki and Nuriko as the kind of troublesome best friends! (Me and my friend Trace are like that...) I think it's cute!

Tamahome needs to stop beating himself up... He's more dramatic then Hotohori (and he talks in third person!)!

(grins.) Excellent fic, and thank you for writing it for me. (hugs.)