"Hush, watching." That's great, I love that. That's totally something I would say.

I like your stories about Tristan and Galahad a lot, I think that being so short just make them nicer, but you should put all of them together, like chapters, because they are all from the same version of the facts, they are related even if there isn't a common plot. Hope you understand my opinion. But above all, hope you continue writing.