WOAH! u and this story r goin straight 2 my faves. U R WICKED AWESOME 2 THE EXTREME..AND I PRAY YOU'LL DO MORE ZERO/HIEAD ROMANCES...PLEASE! O_O

-hjp3697 ;)

Some issues with tenses, and I've never been fond of shifting POVs (too often the characters all "think" alike)... and the memory chip is a bit contrived... but on the whole, not a bad piece of fanfic.

aww it was good
and the ending was sweet
you had to have done i good job... i read it three times ^_~

Continue.You'd probably get a lot more reviews if your computer wasn't set so only people Logged In can review.^^ I love Zero and the last chapter tore my heart.

What's a cutey-cutey wink? Just kidding. I really liked the chapter. I think you've find the perfect tone for the story. Just, please don't have Zero leave Hiead just to spite him. It sounds as if Hiead really is falling for Zero. Au revoir.

Oh! Please update soon. it's interesting. ^^; nto many Megami Kohousei fics out there! CONTINUE!

EGAD! =_=; That sure was mean of Hiead. u_U; I thought it was going to be a fluffy ending oh well. I think this is good. Yes develope the plot a little more so the the fluff will be even sweeter. >D UPDATE PLS!!

OMG!! No... Cliffy hanger!! :P Update soon please. =_=

xDD Its so funny!! Please update soon.

Hiead's so sexy when hes evil. XD Update soon please.