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me2inu
2008-06-28 . chapter 14
oh my god...this is such a good story! im balling like a baby right now. i LOVE your work...PLZ write more sesshomaru/rin stories!! but next time try to add more fluff and circle the story more around sesshomaru and rins relationship. but PLZ do everything else the same! cuz this was awesome!
luver-of-horses
2006-08-12 . chapter 14
once again:
wowee!
that was incredible! i read your first fanfic, "Another's Name" and found myself wondering what occured of old Sess and Rin and so started reading this. What i found was an incredibly moving story. Such sadness, happines, anger and peace, all rolled into one. No-one could do better.
One thought though. What happened to Sess? for like 8 chapters in a row, no sign of him. It was only the last one or two chapters that we heard of him. I must say, i was dieing to find out what had happened to him! but that ending was awesome.

And remember.
NOTHING'S IMPOSSIBLE!!
Going Away
2006-03-07 . chapter 14
nice ending
Avatar of beauty
2005-10-04 . chapter 14
i just started writing when my family life went to h**L and im just know coming back. Your story was great and im looking forward to reading "Another's Name" and the sequels. Your a great writer, just look out for the little things you wrote her when it should have been he some times. I noticed because i do it all the time and have to really watch out for it. =)
S.J. Kidd
2005-08-29 . chapter 14
That was a great story.
Beautifully written...you're such a talented author, thank you for writing that. Is the squel out now?
Bah!
Anway, you did a great job keeping all the characters in their own...err...character. I know for Sesshy that can be hard...great job!
jadorerin
2005-08-24 . chapter 14
and because this fic is just so damn perfect,
i shall wait patiently for the sequel as well!!
wonderful job done.
=)
Akeryou-sama
2005-06-04 . chapter 14
That was way good!! Well its midnight and i must go to bed. I hope to see the sequal soon. You are a very skilled writer. You should write your own book. I really do hope to see the sequal soon. ~~Ja Shae
GoddessLD
2005-06-03 . chapter 14
Yay for Sesshomaru saving the day. I loved Field of Innocence!
inashosetai
2005-06-01 . chapter 14
OMG OMG OMG! PLEASE UPDATE!
ladyrinremix
2005-05-28 . chapter 14
I love both of your stories and i look forward to reading the sequel when it comes out.
DPM
2005-05-27 . chapter 14
Thank you for the beautiful writing ! I was looking forward to the "fini". I must admit I was a little disappointed at the abbreviated way the ending had taken shape. But, as they say, "c'est la vie". For those who can't write, (myself included ;-), we really have no grounds for griping.

It is still a very lovely story and you've done a great job translating emotions into words so flawlessly .
DestinyManifested
2005-05-27 . chapter 14
Wait this is the end? It doesn't really feel... finished. I mean, it was great for what it was, and I know you're contemplating doing a sequel but this ending feels rushed. Maybe I'm just bummed because there was no affection and the two of them never speak.
YLCourt
2005-05-27 . chapter 14
I love the end very much :) Rin is finally a new person and the person walking with her is Sesshoumaru I believe... check out ur other stories I will :)

Nice ending to this fic! But somehow I just dun feel satisfied with the ending...
Mini Nicka
2005-05-27 . chapter 14
What? No! I thought this was when Sessy and Rin would get together. I hope you make the sequel come out soon because I am dying to see when Sessy/Rin get together. Sessys already falling hard.
SilverCrystal Tears
2005-05-27 . chapter 14
i loved it! i would have never guessed that as an ending! Please post epilodge soon
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