that was really good.
i enjoyed reading it just as much u enjoyed writing it.

Reading your fic was a wonderful experience. I didn't notice it was long at all,I really enjoyed it.

aww.. sweet story, ^-^ good job!

Aldutery? Yes. But it IS Eriol and Tomoyo. Mweheh. I understand, lol. ^_^ This was exceptionally good, by the way! Your writing style is really fantastic! ^_^ Write more!

This was simply beautiful. I have always loved the Eriol x Tomoyo pairing, even though is it a complete fan concoction. Recently it's been hard to find a decent ExT fanfiction story, but this one show's their "relationship and love" truly and in a serious way. I mean, I love those cute comedy/romances too, but this was just so much more... satisfying -- in a different way, but a good way. And besides that, you write wonderfully. You have some great talent there. Great job -- loved it!

you're right, it was cliche, however when cliches are done right, they're beautiful. i'm glad to say yours was done right. i like how you embedded little bits of songs into the story, as well as that quote. the title "One of these Days" was suitable for the story, and i guess in the end that day came. i noticed you didnt specify whether kaho had bluntly cheated on eriol when he saw her with another man; for all we know he could be just a friend, but that plays into tomoyo's point not to look into everything with so much detail. i enjoyed reading your piece, it was very well written =]

I liked your story! It's nice!^-^

This turned out way better than I had thought it would be. Great job. (I read the extremly long author's note too @_@)

Normally, I would tell author's to continue one shots, but I think this one ended perfectly. I doubt a continuation would make it any better...unless I'm underestimation you. o.O

aww... i thought that was sweet... *giggles* a good refreshing ccs fic after a while... there are so many out there that are just plain -horrible-... the only good ones i find now are ExT, not that they're bad... i wish i could find a good S+S fic... *tear*

great job once again!

Aww, that was so cute... ^_^ I'm still smiling, aw!! I love the romantic Paris, the passage about the rain was utterly breathe taking. Cliche? Yes. Well done cliche? Yes. Beautiful cliche? Yes.

i like it,
it's cute and sweet
even if you did use every mushy stuff on the book
it was still very sweet
i hope to read more of your work in the future ur a great writer
and I'm adding you to my favs list okay?
keep up the good work

amethyst sweet angel

WOW. I can't remember when the last time I read a CCS fic was. It's been YEARS. I think I was in the seventh grade. Now I am in my senior year. I have been reading and writing fics for years, and do so very, very often. I can honestly say that this is one of THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ, EVER! Im talking like, top three out of all the stories I have ever read in my entire life. I think that says alot. I don't think Im easily won over at all ^^. EXTREMELY well written. I had always loved Eriol and Tomoyo as a couple, but this story has turned me into an avid supporter! This was beautiful. Truly, truly marvelous. I can't wait to read more of your stories. Please, I beg of you, DON'T EVER STOP WRITING!!

that's so sweet!

It had been at least three years since I last read a cardcapter fanfiction. I love Tomoyo/Eriol pairing sice the beginning of time. This story is so wonderful and touching. Well yeah, I don't go for cheating affair either but hey, this is Kaho we are talking about here, and she was caught being with another man. Anyway, I LOVE this story! I hope you'll write a lot more in the future.

*ardently whacks people with a wiffle bat* I've always wanted to whack people with wiffle bat. Hmm... What is a wiffle bat?
Anyway, this was cute. really, it was. But adultery is BAD! *waggles finger*