This is going to be good. Nice start.

I see OCs... a lot of OCs... This is pretty well-written, but did you really have to start with an all OC conversation? The reader has no idea what your characters are about and you fling us right in without any background on any of them. It throws a person off. I'm not asking for an immediate life story (that pretty much ticks me off too) but maybe a gradual easing in? Put some recognizable characters here and there, and it'll be an easier read.