Wow! This is deviously good. Very well-done.
Love it.

It was a tad hard to read. but it was very good! I liked it.

good story but y did pink do the rebellion then if the planet isn't complaining?

cloud sounds so cute with white wings ^^ really liked the story :)kinda hoping u could write one from clouds pov so we could see how they all ended like that from the start :)

So crepy. But good. But creepy! But...good. O.O

I didn't understand this the first time through but now I do; Cloud is the Planet's avatar in a sense. And since the Planet was hurt so badly by humans, it's content with Sephiroth attacking everyone.

Am I right?

I can honestly say I squeaked upon finishing reading this (I found it in a favorites list) and declared 'most awesome fic ever'

I can honestly say I love the way you approached this and it's been added to -my- favorites for others to in turn find. I'll be letting my friends know about it too, and I sincerely hope you've written more in the intervening years.

Oh my god. OH. My. God. Holy effing crap! That was unbelievable! Amazing!! Absolutely amazing! I loved it! The end was awesome!! XD

Okay, i think i am a bit (maybe a lot) confused with all the colours lol! But maybe re-reading it some times will help me get who is who better.. anyway, this is a really well written story (as always) and what a surprise it is to see that you write Seph/Cloud!! (I was already a fan due to Posession and Weapon =P)

Hells

Sorta confusing, but then again, I've had 4 hours of sleep last night and am still having jet lag.
I think by the end, I understood it better.
Loved the parts with Sephiroth & Cloud, also the part With the four wings towards the end. Just beautiful.
I kinda wish this was how FFVII ends :\
Beautiful, original storyline.
(btw, I think this is the 3-4 story of your's I've read)

O.o
WHOA.
Like seriously WHOA. This was FANTASTIC. No, really. I'm like, rambling a little, but only because it is so urgh, makes me lost for words! :o
It was beautifully written, so beautifully descriptive and perfect in the storyline and I was actually able to be immersed and fully feel like a part of the story.
Characters remained vividly detailed and the tales of battles and failures of both citizens and Wings was magic. Don't even get me started on the prayers either, because that was just... It's just... E! xD
I love it so so much and I honestly thank you for posting it! :D
-favourites for sure and will def. be checking out your other stuff-

A wonderful piece, one that's beautiful and elegant. It has a certain feeling to it that is indescribable.

That is... CREEPY. And so totally awesome in the 'what the hell!?' sort of way. I like how you referred to them as colors; made it a bit of a mystery until I first went OH DUH. Then it was a wee bit of a challenge to figure out who was who... kept forgetting Cait; it was bugging me until I figured it out. But at the same time, it was disturbing... 'cause it all makes perfect sense. Kudos for your creepy, but well-written and articulated, story.

'Ntense. nice turnabout

Oh, I love how Cloud's the real master who just listens to Sephiroth because he wants to. Assigning colours to the team is a great idea. I really enjoyed this aftermath fic of Cloud and co. joining Sephiroth. Wonderful work with this. Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97