Sweet... Write more please!

i like, but still my fav is the captivating

i like, but so far captivating is my fav

I just cant get enough of Heiji

this was sweet

Sweet poems! These have a lot of potential, especially when you make not-so-explicit references to storyline (exs. references to "stealing" Aoko's heart, and the line "I remember those same eyes/From a different angle" in "This Feeling"); you choose well by saying a lot with a few words. Do you intend to maintain a poetic structure, or are you changing rhyming patterns, etc. on purpose? If not, I'd suggest choosing a pattern and sticking to it, like rhyming the ends of the second and fourth lines of each stanza throughout the poem. If you are changing the patterns on purpose, I would only comment that it's a little distracting; the poem would evoke more emotions if it maintained a pattern of some sort, even if you choose to compose in free or blank verse. Again, great job! Keep writing!

m...*si-i-i-igh* so nice poems...

What's the matter with me, I don't read poetry!! *shooking head*

Altough I can't help it, but to read yours...:)

You know, I usually don't read poetry (cuz I don't like it), but your poems are good!

How cute! The rhyming is really sweet and the feelings are so accurate! Please write more!

So cute!
I really love It!
If you can, please, write another one ^o^!

Aw...that was so cute and pretty! I like how it rhymes but isn't dumb like other rhyming poems! It's so cute!

Write some more poems!