*is eating tostitos and cheese* _ ah, a snack and a story! great combination!...*read about Mirai watching Goku and Vegeta 'eating' dessert* *spits chips and cheese out* *chokes* agh! what 'appened! whud a' miss! *is confused*...did...no, couldn't have...but...*is disturbed*...ah...*is amused*..._ heh heh...wel, 147 years IS a long time...O sounds like SOMETHING would 'appen. wish i knew WHAT, though. oh well. i'll leave that to my imagination. _ *hands Chu, Goku and Vegeta chips and cheese* share the joy! great one-shot, by the way!

Shimi:(glaring at her previous review)

Trunks: What's wrong now Shimi?

Shimi:My...STUPID COMPUTER WENT OFF ON ME WHEN

I WAS REVIEWING CHUQUITA AT THE END OF BUDOUKAI!

(starts pounding her computer with her fists)

Trunks:(sweatdrops) Shouldn't that hurt?

Shimi:POWPOWPOWPOWPOWPOWPOWPOW No...

POWPOWPOWPOWPOWPOWPOWPOWPOW

Bulma: Why don't you put in what didn't make

on the review that got interuped last time?

Goten: Yeah wasn't the begining a flash-back?

Shimi:(nods)Yeah...I just forgot to metion it

that's all...let's show the nice reviewers...

:: Shimi:(after finding out Son wins the tournement) O.O

Trunks: O.O

Goten:(blinks as his tail forms a question mark)

Vejito: (nods) That's how it went.

Gogeta:(nods in agreement)Uh-huh! Kaasan won! .

Bulma: Yeah you might've guessed already

Shimi.

Shimi:(puts in a cd in her cd player)

WE ARE THE CHAMPIONS MY FRIENDS...AND WE'LL

KEEP ON FIGHTING 'TIL THE END...WE ARE THE

CHAMPIONS WE ARE THE CHAMPIONS NO TIME

FOR LOSERS 'CAUSE WE ARE THE CHAMPIONS...

OF THE WORLD!

Bulma:(sweatdrops)

Shimi:(remembers the fight between onna and Veggie)(puts in another cd)

WE WILL WE WILL ROCK YOU! WE WILL WE WILL ROCK YOU!

Trunks:(grins) Of course toussan could beat

Chi-Chi-san.

Shimi:(remembers when Kuririn lost to onna)

Hello darkness my old friend,I've come to talk

with you again...

Trunks:(turns the cd player off)

(sweatdrops) Quit playing songs from the 60s & 70s

Shimi.

Shimi:(shrugs) Anyways the budoukai is once again

but this time there was NO HERCULE!

that same musice starts playing again

DO-DO-DO-DO-DO-DO-DO-DO-DE-DO-DO-DO-DO-DO-DE-DO

-DO-DO-DO-DO-DO-DE-DODODO!

everyone starts dancing again

Shimi:(doing the Macarenna)Lalalalalalala...

heey Macarena!

Shimi:(nods) And that's how it went..

Trunks:Yeah but there's something still bothering

me though.

Shimi:What is it?

Trunks:What did Mirai see that was so...unatural?

Shimi:(in deep thought)Maybe Son kissing Veggie.

Mirai: O.O...

Goten:Or not.

Trunks:(sees his tail waving in the wind)

Do you even have a name or not?

Shimi:Trunks I'm telling you the tail's name

must be Koshi. (koshithe back of someone)

Trunks:(glances at his tail) ::I hope this dye

will stay on a little longer. ::

Shimi:Well I better hurry and read Chuquita's

next story called Chomp! See you later.

Trunks:Bye.

Goten:(still dancing) Byebye!

Vejito:(now doing the macerana)

Gogeta:(dancing like a robot)

Bulma:(sweatdrops)

heheh i like how mirai vegeta finally discovered kakarot's germs nice one there maybe, unless it's to late for him (having so long with kakarot and not know about them). mirai vegeta can go back to normal. kinda bad there with mirai trunks looking in and getting tramatized though. please continue with stories thank you.

Hi I've been reading your fics for a while now, but I was too lazy to reactivate my email and review. I love most of the stories, especially ones in which Veggie wins, but there are some inacurracies:

The super-strength of the warriors (the higher

your ki, the more physical strength you have) has often been missed out : Vegeta being unable to carry Goku, Saiya-jin having to dodge bullets which couldn't have affected them anyway- chibi Goku couldn't be killed with guns, and Raditsu caught the farmer's bullets in his hand, Chi-chi being able to physically hurt Vegeta before the whole Turles thing etc.

Also, I think the powerup you get from going SSJ is more than you get when going oozarou since Goku's ki increased 50 times when he went SSJ for the first time, while OOzaru only increases your power 10 times- and an ssj can get even stronger than that, as demonstrated by the saiya-jin who went into the room of spirit and time. Therefore, GT was inaccurate since it had oozaru Vegeta crushing SSJ4 Goku, and the whole Golden Ouzaru thing was just a stupid, faulty explanations. So I think the SSJ4 in your 'Flying Saucers' story could be changed to Vegeta going SSJ2 Ouzaru or something and then managing to control it and turn into SSJ4, since he could control his normal ouzaru form already.

Other than that, the stories are really entertaining with the funny aspect.

Great one-shot, Chu! I luv Turles, you should definitely keep him as a regular part of the "Kaka-crew" _ I luv him being all "evil" while he's just really being a pain in the ass, LOL! Hmm, he brings a song to mind, "When You're Evil" by Voltaire. You should check it out, it's really funny and can be fitting for Turles (I would say Vegeta too, but alas, he's been "kaka-fied"). Here's the site: w soliloquise com (slash) souvenirs (slash) music php (hopefully you can read it, stupid FFNet "no web-links rule")

XD... Ahh, Mirai... as I say quite often, "Jeez, you're paranoid!" But with good reason, I suppose...

I've always wanted to do those inkblot tests... ;; Though I wonder what I'd see... ("A Game Boy... a Game Cube... a PS2... Goten... Shadow... Pringles...") ;;

Hehe... yeah, most one-shots turn out to be long, I think... two one-shots for the price of one here, huh? XD

I can see it... you're just itching to write that fic #100! XD Good luck with it! I love looking at the pictures on deviantart!

-Ryuko

I love Turles' insane cheekyness . Who was he talking to and WHAT DID MIRAI SEE?

Great one-shot, very funny! I especially loved the line where Turles exclaims “Haha, I love this house!

Wow, this fic was awesome, Chu! Man, poor Trunks, being traumatized by Kakarot and Vegeta! Hm, I wonder who the person looking for the furniture fit for royalty is...? lol I hope you do another Broly fic soon, I love the ones with him in it! I also can't wait for your GT parody either! Good job and ciao! _

*sleepy yawn* wow, that was a biggun!

I read it on my new palm top- hard work! O

) shame you only kept it PG! I woulda' LOVED to see what Mirai saw through that window... *is very curious*

I laughed so hard at some of those bits...

So, ahem- if Goku and Vegeta are -together- in that timeline, does that mean Miria'll be too scared to go back...? *looks sad* 'cuz his mom n' Gohan sensei are both there... if he can't handle it, then what'll happen when the norm Goku and Vegeta take the bite- as one could say...?

Oh! And, hehe, Turles found the brain-freeze.. I wonder how he'll be acting next fic- or rather, next fic timeline-wise... eheh!

GREAT CHAPPY! You donno' how much I love your fics! )

I can't wait for the BEBI-parody! Veggie's gon' get BITTEN on his Veggie-ARM! NIHEEHEHEHUWAHAHAHA!

on the subject of Brolli...

He's creepy, and funny! D - I wonder what he's 'gon do with dat furniture..?

Oh ho ho ho! This one shot made me "lol" all the way to bed! (I read this late at night.)

And now for some constructive criticism!

Fuinny story, but, hey, what's with all of the misspelled words? I'm not knockin' you or anything, but if you can't spell "Rorschach", you should use a dictionary to help you.

However, great story as always. I'll be making popcorn for fic #100, though!

Reading this has improved my day, and possibly my life. Thank you, and God bless.

-C.N. (...)

This was great! I'll forever be kept in suspense because Mirai never revealed what he saw...oh well.

Can't wait for the Bebi Parody!