wow, for something that was supposed to be a "horribly fluffy blanket scenario" at the beginning... this turned out really great ! I love how you created tenten's personnality and ideas about her life and her job
and it's really well written,, i was captivated ^^

I think I enjoyed this far more than I would have a fluffy blanket scenario. While blanket scenarios do hold their own merit, this proves that you thought far more about it than just the average fluff, revamped to fit your daydreams. The opening is, indeed, very interesting. I cannot quite imagine Tenten saying it, but I'm sure that she might, since this is sometime in the distant, hazy future. You are right in saying that this fic could be both longer and better, but I think you did a magnificent job in cramming these words full of meaning and emotion.

That left me smiling, even if it was rather sad. The word choice was wonderful, and the flow of words isn't choppy or anything. Tenten and Neji were beautifully portrayed. Thanks.

AWESOME!!

:)

cute
real cute
funny how love can make you like that.

wait! it just ended like that?! T__T
i love how you kept them so in character
and you're right..what makes tenten special is that she's very different from all other female characters in Naruto lol i would love to hear you rant about her character =P

Holy crap, that was good.
You could continue this from here. And I would LOVE you if you did. x_x

Very good. I have no idea where you learned to write like that but it is extremely impressive. I hope you are going to continue this story.

very niice~! you write awesome N/T fics ^^. Kudos~!

I love, I love!! Write more NejiTen!

WOW. This is. . . it's. . . It's an amazing piece of work. Spectacular. It's going on my favorites. You have amazing talent for writing, and I hope to see more!

Ooh... very very nice fic. We need more Neji/Tenten fics on ;D

^^ i love tne-ten/neji stories, and this was a great one!~ keep on going, i say!

...hwowzer. I like the way that you characterized Ten Ten and Neji's stubbornness, their unwillingless to admit their feelings and give in to emotions. Ni-hice!
I was kind of confused throughout the entire thing--I wasn't sure what was going on with the rain-nins and the hunter-nins. I understood, however, the confusion that Neji felt and the struggle to choose between doing what one needs to do and what one wants to do, when there really is no difference. You tied it up well at the end.
Nice job! I like! Keep up the good work!

this was...a touching story.
characters kept as themselves, story kept intact and all the events in your story fell perfectly into place...though nevertheless heart-wrenching how it ended.
keep writing=P
~dobyuk princess