I couldn't stay with it. Sorry. Just not my cup of tea.

Well, not much I can say yet, other then speerate the two stories and that this was a good way of slightly feeling in those who know about only one of them. As it is only the first chapter ...

Hiya! It's me again. Just finished reading Heroes Of Lands and it is AWSOME! I don't even know why you would writing these fanfics. You've obviousely captured the mystery of Egypt AND the magic of Redwall, even if you just added Link and Danny Phantom in the stories. I hope you don't plan on giving up on writing, because not only do I want to know what happens in the stories, but you've also got a great talent in writing them. I bet you could come up with an original story of your own. So don't quite on this,okay? It's already too late for me, and I don't want that to happen to you too.

This story is good. I hope you update soon. I do have a question though. Does Link still have the Deku/Goron/Zora/Fierce Deity's masks?

Wow, i really like your story, keep up the good work and update soon!

Nice story so far, you need to update a bit faster though...

So far I've found this to be a good story and an excellent transition of the Zelda world into the realm of Mossflower.(I should know, that game is my all time favorite)

Keep it up!

I hope Marylin & Marigold survive. I would like to get to know them while the story progresses.Plus, I'd STILL like to see Tingle appear. Well, anyway, update soon.

Wow, an Ocarina song. Say, you think we'll run into more people from the Legend Of Zelda franchise in this fic? I myself would like to see Tingle. Well, anyway, update soon.

You.

Because of this story, I love you.

You managed to make a crossover that makes sense, despite both the Redwall books and the Legend of Zelda series being quite different.

I applaud you for this.

Nice work there. Say, will we see the Ocarina Of Time in this?

Awesome dtail, and it looks like the plot is begging to form! Plus, this story combiness 2 of my fav things!

very unique story^^ I loved it and hope for you to update soon.

i liked your story. but i read it ages ago. and theirs still not another one. please write another one soon.

This is great so far. But when you change the person who is talking, you have to make another paragraph. Keep up the good work.