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| adriann 2007-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really good you use details incredibly the only thing was it almost sounded like poetry |
| aspirer 2006-08-16 ch 1,  | abusestop being so self-pitying! this was unbelievable! so heartbreakingly lyrical and sweet, and so accurate to darco. *faves* |
| Jade Danielle 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseAdorable. So cute. I love it! ^_^ |
| Blood Angel 2004-10-12 ch 1, | abuseHmm, this was very unique. I really do love it, it's different. Very cute though ^_^ I really liked the last line. You're absolutely the best! Please write more DxM fics! (or at least finish Forever and Always:p) |
| Vixen-Dragon16 2004-09-21 ch 1, | abuseHey, that was great! I love overly-sappy stories, and this ws definately overly-sappy! I like the part about his hands...anyway, I really loved this story, so, good job! And read my newest chapter in 'Paying For It' if you haven't already! |
| MeoW03 2004-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThat is amazingly wonderful. Nicely done! |
| smoothNcreamy 2004-09-19 ch 1, | abusek dat was not crapy it was cute and very discriptive so good job! |
| Chunkerdunk560 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseActually... I didn't think it was that bad. Yeah there were some parts that were kinda choppy, and hard to follow, but overall it was kinda nice. Very short, very sweet, but then again I'm easy to amuse, others might not think the same. But any-hoo it was nice, could use some work, but still nice ~chunkerdunk560 |
| adamo4eva201 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this story its really sweet Great job :) |
| anjel919 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseIt wasn't the worst thing I have ever read. It was light, almost romantic. A little confusing with some of the word choices. Great discriptions though, very real. I can't flame this because I somewhat enjoyed it, so I won't...even though you said to at the beginning. ;) It was fluffy. |
| amricangrl 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI love this story! It's sappy but it's a good sappy and it's not crap it's very good! |
| Kaitlinbell 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness, don't beat yourself up over that. That was wonderful as is your other story. It wasn't crappy or horrible or sappy. It was very poetic and sweet. And I'm very glad you wrote it. I really liked how you kept asking questions only to find exactly what you meant at the end. Like I said before, it's very poetic in that sense. And of course you are a master of the sensory words. Please keep up the good work. I find nothing you do to be below wonderful, so please don't stop on me. :D I would be sad. |