Amazing.

Amazing story ! I just crazy about Virgin Suicides!! I really love this fan fiction !I like how you writte

lOVE &kISSES
lEMON BH

wow... that was incredible. you're an amazing writer.

This is heartbreaking, given what happens in the end. Your prose is beautiful, delicate in its dance, very nearly hiding the rawness of the words, the truth in the emotions at play.

Very powerful work here. An adept look into Lux Lisbon in the aftermath of Trip's abandonment.

Good job.

Very good story but I think you should raise the rating just a little.

Wow.
I really mean that, it's brilliant. That film is one of my favourites, I've seen it hundreds of times and it haunts me, I think it's amazing. Scary, haunting, but amazing. You definitely did it justice. The only thing is, was there a change in person half way through? It seemed to go from, past to present, hm maybe it was just moi.
But anyway, I am impressed, greatly, fantastico!

brilliant, as always. The bittersweet tones of every piece of writing you submit are so full of truth - they generate their own form of beauty. Through gut-wrenching pain, that the characters are evidently feeling, the symbols on a tired screen come alive. I don't know how you do it, but your writing truly is beautiful.