This was interesting. Plz update soon!

I'm disappointed that you didn't finish the other story, but this one seems like its going to be good. I liked the part where Mina asks Kunzite if he got pregnant with another girls baby...lol.

Mina didn't really seem out of character to me. She's been down before, but not too often or at least its not shown too often. Plus we know not many people like being lonely and I sure doubt the goddess of love would be one of those people. The loveless goddess of love is just so painfully ironic, but even though she feels these things she doesn't really make them known to anyone else, just like the whole Alan & Katrina thing when she was Sailor V.

However, Ami was out of character, but I'm sure you have some reason for it. Besides in the last story she was kind of OOC, but it worked well. Not to mention after all those things that happened to her she's bound to have went through a change.

Good chapter. I wish you would finish Frozen Rain though. There's one thing that bothers me, you have to add more comas. I had a little bit of trouble undersatnding some of the sentences. Comas would make it more comprehensible. Besides that, I liked it. I really want to know what happened, for all my questions to be answered. Update soon please!

Ok, I am feeling this...where's the next chapter?:)

Sounds good. I have to go back and read frozen rain.