Well, this was pretty funny, though Ai living three hundred years and not having to worry about people attempting to forcibly extract the secrets of immortality from her seems a bit odd.
You do a good job portraying your original character as interesting and sympathetic and even though the audience knows where this is going the conclusion is still enjoyable.
Your theory on the workings of APTX makes a great deal of sense... right up to the point where some of the failed cures caused instant reversion to normal temporarily. But frankly, that bit never made scientific sense, since it's a lot easier to rapidly shed mass than rapidly gain it.

Nice story. I'm working on one too. Check it out when you get the time to.

Ha, so funny! I was actually looking at your profile because of your Harry Potter stories, but then I saw this and thought 'Might as well look' (I watched Detective Conan once). As soon as I read the passage where the 'little girl' was described, I knew it had to be Ai. Great job, I love it!

Dude! I'm with Haibara on this one, I bet their faces when they saw her were priceless! Go Haibara! Pullin' mean jokes on Freshmen! You rock girl!

Why don't you make a story out of this one, the same way Ms. Ysabet says she did with 'Windfall'. I swear that you could make one very good story out of this one.

hey why don't you make a sequel to this story which details what happened to the others huh? that would be great!

Very interesting. I have been anticipating something like this for a long time. Written very well! But the fact that APTX stands for apotoxin could be found on many websites I visited.

Okay,now I'm interested.about the apotoxin.I was thinking that apotoxin just turns people into
mush(EW!MUSHIE PEOPLE!)but then again,your
right,and I'm wrong.But something gives me hope...
...I didn't do research!At this point of life I'll do anything to get a laugh.

WAIT!I FORGOT ABOUT THE REOSON I'M REVEIWING!
At first,I wanted to tell that it's called apotoxin in the manga.Don't need to be a detective
to figure out that I'm a nerd.

Well... You did do your research, that's for sure. And I wondered about that before I read this... Excellent research. I think you have cracked the code!

Simply fantastic! Not only do you write fabulous fiction, but you're a wonderful researcher as well! This explanation of the Apotoxin certainly would explain why Haibara is having such trouble coming up with a cure; it would be near impossible to eliminate such a poison, particularly at the rate at which cells grow, divide, and die! Anyway, wonderful piece. I can absolutely picture Ai smiling at her class like that. Great job!

this was great. ^^ I love that you did research. Ai was perfect in this story.

Astounding. You're a science nerd AND a talented fiction writer. Lucky you. :D I am really intrigued by this concept you've come up with since I too have been caught up in the apparent misconception that Conan and Ai will grow up again. Interesting... very interesting... Thank you for so graciously leaving it up for grabs. And great fic! Completely original and well-written. I suppose I'll have to go check out your thirty-chapter stories now... oh dear...

I like this! I love how you wrote this one-shot piece, and i do love the ending! hehe...who would have ever thought?

Very interesting. I usually don't read anything but HP fan fic, but this time I'm glad I made an exception.