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| Mystica234 2008-06-22 ch 1,  | abuseNice story. I'm working on one too. Check it out when you get the time to. |
| Wassermagierin 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseHa, so funny! I was actually looking at your profile because of your Harry Potter stories, but then I saw this and thought 'Might as well look' (I watched Detective Conan once). As soon as I read the passage where the 'little girl' was described, I knew it had to be Ai. Great job, I love it! |
| katiesparks 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseDude! I'm with Haibara on this one, I bet their faces when they saw her were priceless! Go Haibara! Pullin' mean jokes on Freshmen! You rock girl! |
| anonymous 2005-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhy don't you make a story out of this one, the same way Ms. Ysabet says she did with 'Windfall'. I swear that you could make one very good story out of this one. |
| anonymous 2005-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abusehey why don't you make a sequel to this story which details what happened to the others huh? that would be great! |
| Enkou 2004-12-22 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I have been anticipating something like this for a long time. Written very well! But the fact that APTX stands for apotoxin could be found on many websites I visited. |
| **PRIVATE** 2004-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay,now I'm interested.about the apotoxin.I was thinking that apotoxin just turns people into mush(EW!MUSHIE PEOPLE!)but then again,your right,and I'm wrong.But something gives me hope... ...I didn't do research!At this point of life I'll do anything to get a laugh. WAIT!I FORGOT ABOUT THE REOSON I'M REVEIWING! At first,I wanted to tell that it's called apotoxin in the manga.Don't need to be a detective to figure out that I'm a nerd. |
| AinoMinako 2004-09-23 ch 1, | abuseWell... You did do your research, that's for sure. And I wondered about that before I read this... Excellent research. I think you have cracked the code! |
| KalinaRaama 2004-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseSimply fantastic! Not only do you write fabulous fiction, but you're a wonderful researcher as well! This explanation of the Apotoxin certainly would explain why Haibara is having such trouble coming up with a cure; it would be near impossible to eliminate such a poison, particularly at the rate at which cells grow, divide, and die! Anyway, wonderful piece. I can absolutely picture Ai smiling at her class like that. Great job! |
| ada 2004-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was great. ^^ I love that you did research. Ai was perfect in this story. |
| Elanor 2004-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseAstounding. You're a science nerd AND a talented fiction writer. Lucky you. :D I am really intrigued by this concept you've come up with since I too have been caught up in the apparent misconception that Conan and Ai will grow up again. Interesting... very interesting... Thank you for so graciously leaving it up for grabs. And great fic! Completely original and well-written. I suppose I'll have to go check out your thirty-chapter stories now... oh dear... |
| lilyqueen777 2004-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this! I love how you wrote this one-shot piece, and i do love the ending! hehe...who would have ever thought? |
| PhoenixxStarr 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I usually don't read anything but HP fan fic, but this time I'm glad I made an exception. |