Butiful!

Wonderful job! I wish it hadn't ended. I would love to have read more of their way through Shelob's Lair! You're a great writer and I could really feel what Frodo was going through, and how easily it might have been to accept the ring with it's promises to give Frodo peace.

Very good! i certainly enjoyed it!br8 job *hugs*

love,
Katie
lotrgirl1415@

This story does a powerful job of conveying the horrors that Frodo experienced. The reader could feel the pull of the ring through the descriptions of Frodo's physical anguish and mental battles. Effective job changing the tone of the story- to that of comfort and hopefulness- as Frodo was dreaming about the sea.