I love it so far :3 it looks kinda abandon, but I hope you continue it someday :3

Aw! There was a storm a day ago and I was kicked off in the middle of this chapter! My computer's fried, so now I'm on the school's computer! Anyway, I'm sad you havn't updated for such a long while. This is such a funny, cute story! If you have problems, I can understand that. I just hope you might continue this, someday.

...Is this fic dead? Crudmuffin, I need to start checking the last update date BEFORE I read something (linked through a bronzeshipping site).

Anyways, I love how you write Malik! He's so cute when he's being bitter. I really liked how he was enjoying Mariku's voice in his dream and got pissed when he woke up. Ryou and Bakura are so fluffy ^^ Also, the Bakura/Malik friendship is too funny. The whole group of them at the Ishtar house (those two plus Ryou and Isis) have a nice kind of flow to their interaction.

One bit of criticism...that you've probably already overcome considering you wrote this a couple years ago...anyways, it sometimes isn't clear when you change viewpoints. I'll be wondering why Bakura is thinking something and have to stop to figure out that it's really Malik.

This is such a great start to a story I really wish you'd continue, though I don't realisticly expect that to happen (don't worry ^^;; ).
~Stormy

Yah! Go Ryou! You knew at first I thought it was Ryous luv story. But it cleared up, this chap.

Continue or else.

E!! o.O this is lovely!! XD even if it is a little OOC, I can deal with that ^.^ especially when it's this much fun. *evil laughter* malik's in de-nial, Malik's in de-nial (and not the river either)

XP I'm so lame. I love your story though! I hope it gets a new chapter SOMEtime in the future.

Hope you can update sometime soon, this is a really good fic'!

He he, Ku-chan! *goes off to watch Sukisho*

Oh! And you say "...ing some" a bit too often. You should probably check for that.

hurry up and make ryou and bakura together. Please=)

reesescupprincess

Ryou's so sweet!! I could just hug im'!!update soon, please!!

omg omg omg omg omg aren't you going to update?!please update soon!

Update... please... I love it when Malik is yelling at Marik. It's hilarious. And I've been waiting forever. So UPDATE!

Please add more chapters!

i got an idea you should use, maliks just like chilling, as you do, and theres a animal documentery about how the male of the species, to attract a mate,trys to impress, and gain the attention of the potential mate. me and my friend were talking about it, i doesnt fit into my story so..feel free to use it, catch you later!

Gosh things are like getting interesting polz update soon.

Ish so GOOD! ~falls in love~ All my favoite couplings along with a superb plot and wonderful writing! IT'S A DREAM COME TRUE!

Update, update, update!

Wonderful as always! Keep it up whenever you've got the spare time...if you want to...yep. No pressure, heh.

-Saiyo-