Well, I've read both this and the NC-17 version, but nonetheless, this story is so damn sweet.

Seriously, it's been a while since the last time I came across another romance story that made me go all "Aw..." inside. ^^

You should write more of these things. But this is definitely another to my favorite stories record.

. . . I'll just say this, this story is original, and doesn't have any petty character bashing that plagues the pokemon stories here.
You pay attention to grammar and spelling, and it isn't about saving the world out of the blue.
Complete one chapter stories are rare on this site these days.

i love it write more write more.

I'm not in super-long review mode right now, but I don't think, even if I was, that I could say anything mroe about this. Though it was a bit rushed, it was extremely well-written and just a great story. Good job! Whew!

:)--allie--(:

P.S.-- if you ahve the time, I would love it if you could review my story. No pressure, though!