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G-Matt
2009-10-01 . chapter 4
Cute story!
zandermon
2009-03-27 . chapter 4
takato? dead? no future children with rika!? No!
The Mad shoe1
2007-09-08 . chapter 4
Good fic, it's great that you kept Rika's personality, several authors does have the tendency to turn her into a sniveling drama queen.
the vampire armond
2007-09-01 . chapter 2
good story
lol
2007-07-08 . chapter 4
weird its like i already now exactly how the first chapters gona be im sychic... finaly your back
Dragonborn
2006-08-31 . chapter 3
This is a fairly solid rukato, tell me; will there be other pairings or is it just Rika and Takato?
Kuroy
2006-05-01 . chapter 3
great Rukato story i love it
Joeseph4
2006-02-22 . chapter 1
please either continue and update this great story of yours or please delete it so that those who read it and enjoyed it like me will not be left hoping you are going to update if the truth is you are never going to update again. by the way, pardon me if this review seems a little rude but i feel this advice needed to be given.
NUMBER ONE TRUE Rukato fan
2005-12-21 . chapter 3
rika takato 18 years later:

Daddy can i have a digimon?
Madd the sane
2005-12-14 . chapter 3
Please update. The story seems like a good one.
Michael Carroll
2005-08-17 . chapter 1
I just want to say I love this story to me you did an awsome job on it can't wait to see what's in store for them in chapter 4 up date soon please and thank-you.
nightmare car
2005-08-09 . chapter 3
aw thats so sweet i hate sweet! Rex! Get the crowbar!

Rex: yes sir
Zeug
2005-07-10 . chapter 1
...

you got BOTH of them TERRIBLY OOC here. That girl is DEFINITELY not Makino Ruki. Geez, she isn't that aggressive. And she wouldn't just do THAT out of the blue. Really, now, Rika HAS dignity you know. Really, if she were to confess any feelings, it wouldn't be in that way.

Besides, what was Takato's mom THINKING when she said that her SON was going over to stay at a GIRL'S house to sleep (not to mention for more than a week) rather than go and stay with a male friend's house who was available?

and I read part of your 2nd chapter...what kind of insane mother would be GLAD that her teenage daughter just MADE OUT with a guy in BED?!

Really, you need a better excuse. Sorry to say, this story's pretty pathetic. I don't even feel like reading the rest.

Also, the story is pretty fast-paced. Suggestion: Don't add author notes in the middle of the story for it disrupts the atmosphere.
krb_1_rush
2005-04-07 . chapter 1
this fic is good when are you gonna finish it? Please, Please just update
notyouraverageblond
2005-03-09 . chapter 3
That's so sweet! I love putting Takato and Rika together, they seem perfect. Keep up the good work!
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