This story is really sweet. I cried while I was reading! You did a great job on this story, and even though it was depressing at the beginning, it still had a happy ending

You have found a perfect way to make Ryouga a being, not ink and paper. I can see perfectly the way he sees the world through your eyes. I truly enjoyed this and am refering it to a few fanfiction reading friends, along with In Darkness, In Fire.

I do believe you should be published. If only copyright laws weren't so strict.

Awesome. Keep it up man, this is well written and has a solid message behind it. If only the rest of the fanfiction here could even compare to this, would be a far better place.