Who should flame you for being sick?

Okay... I was a bit disappointed when I got an authort alert telling me you updated everything and then seeing you just added a note :-/

but I guess your not to blame... I hope it all goes well with school so you get to write soon ;-)

bye,

Lie

I am glad your updating your stories again. I am really enjoying the story. Please udpate soon, so I can read, what happens to Shirley's parents, and how she captures the bomber?

Looks like the plot is taking some unexpected twists;o) Keep writing, keep the SH world alive.

I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, what happens to Shirley's parents and what does she do to find the mystery man?

I just fond the story. I am really enjoying it. Please update soon, so I can read, what Shirley finds out about Stricker and stops him?

Thanks! Finally something new to read :-)

Only the last chapter and Bo's actions seemed a bit strange and rushed to me...

bye

Lie

Forget Sherlock or as many would say, "No shit, Sherlock!"

Update your other stories that you forgot about.

An Update!

I was nearly giving up on the story...

so thanks for updating :-) ... but now please hurry up! ;-)

AH! Wait, what happened next? I really liked the going back and forth between Shirley's sleeping pov and Bo's pov in the waking world. Well done.

Okay, I'm dying to know what happens and who that man is? Good job with your character reactions (I think I told you that already though)

So far I am really intrigued. Also, I think you've done a good job of not making the situations involving the emotional Shirely out of character.

Looking good. Can't wait to find out more about the guy with the spikey hairdo. Just who could he be...

Anyway keep up the good work, looking forward to next chapter.

Hey! I'm happy to find a new story in the shirley holmes section... I liked the first 3 chapters and the plot... now I'm going to read the next two chapters offline so I thought I should give you now a review before I forget it... keep writing, update soon and thank you for posting ;-)

Lie

Hey! Good chap!

Their kiss was very cute, even tought I don't think it was the best timming! After all, Shirley's parents are in a delicate condition and she isn't in a very romantic mood.

Anyway I'm waiting excitingly for the next kiss! Maybe in a more romantic atmosphere!

Update soon!

Hey! Nice to see one more Shiley's Fic writer rising! It's been sometime since a new story is writen.

Your beggining was good! I'd say kind of rushed. Take your time, we're in need of Shirley Holmes material and if you can make it longer, the best! See, I'm brazilian, I watched the show in portuguese, but I'm pretty sure the right spelling is Alicia, not Alecia, as you've been writing.

Since the show was canceled (I haven't gotten over that yet! O.o) it's been difficult to find sites and fics about it. I don't really think it's necessary to kill Shirls' parentes only to trigger a romance between Bo and Her! It's to big of a trauma. But I'll trust your skills as a writer, partially because it's your first fic, partially because I'm dying to know what happens next!

Please don't see this as s flame, on the contrary, it's only a readers point of view and suggestions. Keep on writing! And update soon!