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electric pancake
2006-06-13 . chapter 1
Hee, so very cute and Lorelai-like. Love it!
Hamlets-pirate
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
Hehe! Date shoes always suck. I personally blame my shoes for every embarassing thing ever to happen to me on a date!
Lorelei Elizabeth Mariano
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
haha. that was awesome. i liked it no loved. the whole car scence part, seemed like it was possible too. really good story.
sosmitten
2005-01-30 . chapter 1
Cute - Very Lorelai!
nadmar
2005-01-12 . chapter 1
That fic was one of the cutest fics I've ever read :)
gilmorefan1200
2004-12-22 . chapter 1
that was funny
longlivelukeandlorelai
2004-12-07 . chapter 1
That was the cutest thing ever! You should write a fic with more chapters
PuffingNoise
2004-09-26 . chapter 1
I loved this!
It had me laughing out loud.
and I love how the shoes were always making everything worse. hehe
And I loved the way it ended.
Dolfinz
2004-09-25 . chapter 1
aww that's so cute! ^^ I love it!!
Mimimoon
2004-09-23 . chapter 1
Two words: too cute!

continue like this! :D
MM Vermelha
2004-09-23 . chapter 1
Aliarose,

I JUST LOVED IT! You wrote it very well, girl!
It´s funny, it´s cute, has a lot of LL.. it´s just perfect!!

My congrats!! :)
You got yourself a new fan!
starsarefading
2004-09-21 . chapter 1
Hee. I'm so giddy. You know what I loved the most?

"Babette was practically plastered to the door, phone already to her ear. Luke and Lorelai make out in a public place while its still light out! News at Eleven!"

I pictured an almost cartoon-like Babette plastered to a damn glass door and I starting laughing out loud. Too loud, actually. ;)

Much yayness for all the table changing happening in this fic, Lorelai klutzy, Luke smiley and confident.

And he saw her undies! Now, don't even try to convince me that she didn't want him to see them.

Loved it, a very fun read. Congrats.

Deh
pokey
2004-09-21 . chapter 1
Clumsy!Lorilai and Sexy!Confiedent!Luke, what is there not to love about this fic. Wonderful! Loved every word of it!
Lady Mercury
2004-09-20 . chapter 1
Loved it..the ending was great..:)
Copperboom
2004-09-20 . chapter 1
Cute!! What a fun take on Lorelai's POV during a freakout. I like the conclusion she came to, too!
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