 electric pancake 2006-06-13 . chapter 1Hee, so very cute and Lorelai-like. Love it! |
 Hamlets-pirate 2005-10-09 . chapter 1Hehe! Date shoes always suck. I personally blame my shoes for every embarassing thing ever to happen to me on a date! |
 Lorelei Elizabeth Mariano 2005-05-16 . chapter 1haha. that was awesome. i liked it no loved. the whole car scence part, seemed like it was possible too. really good story. |
 sosmitten 2005-01-30 . chapter 1Cute - Very Lorelai! |
 nadmar 2005-01-12 . chapter 1That fic was one of the cutest fics I've ever read :) |
 gilmorefan1200 2004-12-22 . chapter 1that was funny |
 longlivelukeandlorelai 2004-12-07 . chapter 1That was the cutest thing ever! You should write a fic with more chapters |
 PuffingNoise 2004-09-26 . chapter 1I loved this!
It had me laughing out loud.
and I love how the shoes were always making everything worse. hehe
And I loved the way it ended. |
 Dolfinz 2004-09-25 . chapter 1aww that's so cute! ^^ I love it!! |
 Mimimoon 2004-09-23 . chapter 1Two words: too cute!
continue like this! :D |
 MM Vermelha 2004-09-23 . chapter 1Aliarose,
I JUST LOVED IT! You wrote it very well, girl!
It´s funny, it´s cute, has a lot of LL.. it´s just perfect!!
My congrats!! :)
You got yourself a new fan! |
 starsarefading 2004-09-21 . chapter 1Hee. I'm so giddy. You know what I loved the most?
"Babette was practically plastered to the door, phone already to her ear. Luke and Lorelai make out in a public place while its still light out! News at Eleven!"
I pictured an almost cartoon-like Babette plastered to a damn glass door and I starting laughing out loud. Too loud, actually. ;)
Much yayness for all the table changing happening in this fic, Lorelai klutzy, Luke smiley and confident.
And he saw her undies! Now, don't even try to convince me that she didn't want him to see them.
Loved it, a very fun read. Congrats.
Deh |
 pokey 2004-09-21 . chapter 1Clumsy!Lorilai and Sexy!Confiedent!Luke, what is there not to love about this fic. Wonderful! Loved every word of it! |
 Lady Mercury 2004-09-20 . chapter 1Loved it..the ending was great..:) |
 Copperboom 2004-09-20 . chapter 1Cute!! What a fun take on Lorelai's POV during a freakout. I like the conclusion she came to, too! |