heh heh... they're both lonely... sucked in, Joren!

Haha. You can try, Joren.

this is a cool oneshot, really original. i know there wont be any more chapters, but u should write more original fics like this. ur real good at it. best wishes!

ok in all honesty i was a bit umm disturbed but there wsa a lot of creativity in there. However i suggest you um how should i say this? use your creativity for something a little less disturbing. I'M NOT FLAMMING YOU THOUGH!

Haha this is funny and really good!!

he he that choo cute...joren baby having trouble being manly? aww ha ha i loved it! oh and garvey ...floating blue eyes in front of his eyelids aw poor baby...amazing and original!

hmm...i love this...so cute...well, not really cute, but good and well written. you should add more...please?

Kind of disturbing...but well written. I like it.

how old is Joren in this story?
just wondering
other than that great story
very unique