I'm happy too! That was awesome!

good story

I loved it! I am a big Jak and Kiera! Just one thing. Tess gets turned into an ottsel at the end of Jak 3.

If thats how the whole thing ends... THEN I'LL BE HAPPY! Great oneshot!

*sniffs and cies* dang now that is an ending I can be happy with :D

I am the real Jak! fear me and all my guns! especially the Vulcan Fury! and the Peace maker! Yes! Oh. and I liked the story. so did Dax. Yeah.

The real Jak

I love Jak! He is the coolest, and the video games are awsome. And my brother says Ratchet and Clank could beat Jak & Daxter any day. I laugh in their faces.

I know the Precursor alphabet. Mwahahahaha

Nice story. I'm going to read the others now!

aw. That was so sweet. I loved it.

it was good, i really enjoyed it! two thumbs way, way up!

Yes, "it was worth it"- for you to write this! ;)

Loved it, write more like it. P

1,2,3, AW!

This is a very decent fic, actually. It was great. And I love how you have the "Was is worth it?" thing going on in italics and then you have the ending line the answer to the question. Great job.

gah.. repetetive is the worst, but its a pretty good romance fic from those Ive seen. Most people overdue it like a bad soap opera instead of being realistic. You did a pretty good job with that part though.

this was really good!