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| Lilly 2006-06-21 ch 10, anon. | abuseUsually I would consider this as bad news since there isn't another chapter but I've just finished my exams and I couldn't be any happier. If your going to restart this, you better do a good job and you most definitly will have to update more often. So, I guess all I could say now is post soon. |
| Pippin 2006-02-01 ch 9, anon. | abuseRight on Lils! Quite a fun chapter, update soon. |
| Lilly 2006-01-31 ch 9, anon. | abuseWhat's with all these stupid rules their putting? Hey, rules are made to be broken! (Pipp probably agrees with me, always does ) Ah... well, great chapter. Hope your séjour en France était bon, je ne peux pas vraiment dire la même chose pour moi-même. Update soon. |
| Saiyan Of Legend 2005-07-26 ch 8, | abuseAw man you made Brolly a weenie eh its your story cant wait till next chapter |
| Gadoken King 2005-07-24 ch 8, | abuseThe overall quality of the chapter's presentation was handled much better this time around. Good work. If Goten and Trunks plan on fusing, will you have Goku and Vegeta do the same? Well, I guess it would depend on how well Gotenks did against him. So I guess we shall see. France, huh? Sounds exciting. I hope you enjoy yourself! I'll look for your next chapter when you get back, then. |
| Pippin 2005-07-18 ch 8, anon. | abuseI should be saying HURRAY FOR NEW CHAPTER! Woohoo! Ok, I’m done. Nice job on this one, don’t tan too much in the sun. Bon voyage! |
| Lilly 2005-07-18 ch 8, anon. | abuseWhy is everyone going on vacation except for me? That is so unfair. Here I am suffering in the heat while you will be lounging around by the pool. The numbers are gone! Yay! You just made my day, I was so bored. Great chapter! You write really well and I can already tell the fic will be getting better soon (it’s not an insult). Thanks for taking the time to answer my questions, I promise not to ask too many if you keep those updates coming. Well, have a great summer. |
| Pippin 2005-07-09 ch 7, anon. | abuseInteresting. I don't have any idea where this is going but if you update I'm sure I'll find out. |
| Lilly 2005-07-09 ch 7, anon. | abuseAww, I feel so bad for you. I would give you a hugg but then again it's totally not me. Geez, women don't exist in your world, do they? It's a shame. Well, you are doing a good job at making me wonder what the real plot is all about. That's always good. If you could have other things going on in the story besides just having it all about Cain. You know, like... I don't know how to explain it. Ohh, just update soon and really I mean soon. |
| Lilly 2005-07-09 ch 6, anon. | abuseWhy would you want to get rid of Brolly? Honestly, where is your... forget it. |
| Lilly 2005-07-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseWho the heck was that mysterious guy? I like his style. And do those aliens actually think that they can capture Caine that easily? I have to admit this is starting to get better. Sorry I doubted you. ( don't you dear think I'm going soft ) |
| Lilly 2005-07-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love when they do the evil laugh thing. How old are Trunks and Goten? You probably won't even answer my questions anyway, so what's the point in asking? |
| Lilly 2005-07-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseWhy would Brolly want to control his anger? They need some crazy people over there. It makes it all the more interesting, don't you think? |
| Lilly 2005-07-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat really does suck doesn't it? I haven't written any stories for you to review but, I will review yours. I hope you don't mind if I comment a bit. Well, I don't really get the point of the story. The guy was bored cause no one was strong enough to challenge him and put up a fight. So, he decides that he's going to play dead and reappear years later. Then he gets trapped in a crystal by what's his face and is found 1500 years later or was he lost? Is it all going to be constant fighting and stuff? And what's with the numbers? Oh well , I'll just keep reading, I guess. |
| Lilly 2005-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseUm... what to say? This is the first time I read a fic that is by a guy so... yeah, it's kind of weird. Not that it's a bad or anything it's just... Ok I'll shut up now. |