So cute, and I love the banter between them. Great fic.

To be posted 2 Apr 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.

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Post KOTOR: Being sick is no fun

This is a light hearted little piece, with Revan being the petulant sick little girl who won’t admit it. I noted the comments about misspellings, I just wish I had read it early enough to see them.

Pick of the Week

Loved that last line

This is absolutely adorable. I'd quote my favorite part for you, but you'd just end up with your entire story in my review, so I'll leave it be. I love it!

Aw. Cute! Love it! :D

Ha!

Excellent, Excellent! Very funny! Great job.

Yet another good story with Carth in it, hurray for Carth.

LOL...cute story arrow!

hahaha, very cute :)

I guess even very powerful Jedi can have the flu... lovely idea and well done for the story. Them arguing is always good to read...

Aww...a short but sweet story to the lasting love between Carth and Revan. Even with a cold, he still thinks she's great. Made me giggle.

Heehee... that was certainly amusing.

Ah, romantic fluffage at its best.

Now there's an interesting concept - a sick Revan. Now reading the title I thought that Carth was going to be playing flyboy nurse for everyone's favorite Sith Lord. But nope, instead the two were provoking each other into hilarity.

I especially liked how the two flipped positions. Carth said she had the flu, Revan denies it, and then Revan is claiming she has some bantha-size influenza and Carth retorts its an itty-bitty cold. It was very effective overall.

Good pacing with the dialogue, easy to read and was quite the chuckler. Nice job, Arrow!

Aw, this is ever so cute 3 I love how you've made Revan just as frustratingly stubborn as Carth always describes her to be in the game, and the dialogue between them. An enjoyable read _

Aside from the aforementioned typos which seem to have been mostly corrected, I think this is a great read. A nice little look into the life of a hero and the man who loves her...and how hard that must be.