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| aj 2008-01-12 ch 13, anon. | abusethat was perhaps the best story i havwe read on these 2 so far its was weird seeing koga so gruff at first but i think it made things more fun (and between u and me i hate inuyasha so i liked what u made of him *evil chuckle*) i hope u contiue on making stories as great |
| persephonesfolly 2007-12-16 ch 13,  | abuseYour collaborative efforts are such fun to read! It's amazing how well the Inuyasha characters translate to modern day Texas. I can totally see Naraku as an evil government spymaster, and Kouga and Miroku were believable as siblings. Sesshoumaru was a bit weird since he was a lot more human and emotionally accessible than he was in the anime, but he made for a good confidant for Kagome that way. Loved the ending you gave him, and Kouga and Kagome's ending was nicely wrapped up as well. Is there a side story for Miroku and Sango? Their ending wasn't nearly as satisfying as the others. Perhaps someone could hit Miroku on the head and give him amnesia so he'll forget to be such a flirt? |
| Dark Fox 14 2007-07-24 ch 13, | abuse-snickers- Kouga's in for a good surprise then. Anyway great story! =3 |
| xladykittyx 2007-07-11 ch 13, | abusewow great story. |
| FlamingRedFox 2007-07-07 ch 13, | abuseHmm... That was... like a million times different from what I normally read. Im not normally a fan of Kag/Kouga fics, but you had the setting I was lookin for and the only decent summery that was able to peak my interest, haha. I must say, overall I twas berry impressed. Twas a good fic. I very much enjoyed the Sango/Miroku rollercoaster (ish a San/Mir addict) and it was nice to read something that wasn't Kag/Inu or Kag/Sess. Wonderful, wonderful job! This fic earns a place on me favourites list. XD Wonderful fic! Sincerely, ~FlamingRedFox |
| cowgirlkitten2000 2007-06-29 ch 13, | abusewow i really enjoyed reading this story very much. u did a wonderful job with it. thank you both for writing it. |
| Silver Moon Vampire 2007-05-08 ch 13, | abusedamn and you HAD to end it there? O well you should make a sequel... |
| Gold Paint 2007-03-30 ch 13, | abuse*large sigh of contentment* There is nothing better than a godd fanfic... |
| blah 2007-02-05 ch 13, anon. | abusewhat a amasizn story. though i was upset to read that this was the last chapter. truthfully i believe there is more to this story. but what is done is done, no matter how upseting this may be. you did a great job! bye |
| cutee2054 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseSo is Inuyasha gonna come up in the story at all? What about Kikyo? The story is super cool, can't wait to read the rest! |
| beaBIANCA 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseLove it so far. Can't wait to read next chapter |
| SYLVAngelicDemon 2006-11-08 ch 13, | abuseso sngo and miroku didn't work out. kagome and kouga have a future. inuyasha actually has to do work for a living and sesshomaru has his family back. |
| maddy midnight 2006-11-07 ch 13, | abusethat was a great story. generally i do not llike AU stories, but thi one was great |
| regretfully-yours-Cassy-cha... 2006-09-23 ch 13, | abuseplease update soon |
| RachelTheSilentKunoichi 2006-09-13 ch 13, | abuseaw! i love the inuyasha kagome pairing much better (no offense) but this story is great! |