Interesting ending, it seemed quite abrupt. However i enjoyed the story.

Cel

good chapter so update soon and keep writing its great.

While this story had a good plot, there are a few errors in consistency. For instance, you had Harry leaving Hogwarts due to Fudge only a few days later you're claiming it's Christmas. It really only should have been the 2nd week of Sept. You also had Snape going back to being a death eater after he was already told that Voldemort knew he was a spy. It's almost like you just needed somebody there to get Harry out of Durmstrang, and you should have thought of another way to go about that.

I'm not sure if it was a mistake to have Harry and Hermione join the Unspeakables, but you never show them apart of them. You have her still teaching at school, then after the final battle they go on a world tour for a year, then Harry becomes Headmaster. What ever happened with the Unspeakable job?

You also never followed up on what happened with Sirius. He's brought to the hospital wing, Harry visits him once, and then we never hear another thing about him. We also never hear of Harry or Hermione visiting Ron, and since he is their best friend, fried brain or not, you would think they would still visit him.

So like I said, the plot is very good it's your execution of it that leaves it hanging.

great story please kkeep up the good work update soon

Not so bad for a crappy ending, huh? (giggles)

Later;)

It was a good story... Well done... ;)

you are a frigging genius!
i also love the pairings you love!

this story was great,i took some time reading it today, when i found it, and im sad to see it go so fast, but a sequel would be great

great fic. a little rushed but otherwise good.

The ending two chapters could use a little work, but overall it was an awesome fan fiction. Please continue to write.
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BlackRoseFire

Retarded wannabe super!harry crap. Get rid of this trash and quit writing, there is no future in it for you.

Good story, I loved how Harry was so powerful!

It wasn't crap. I loved it. I think you rushed the ending a bit... maybe a rewrite at a later date then, just the last chapter. Thanks

I thought it was excellent! Very good job. :)

I enjoyed your story and am exstatic that it is complete...but I have one question...WHAT HAPPENED TO SIRIUS?...sorry for the caps but he is my fav character and you brought him back but then didn't say another word about him.