Ukyo IS ranma's fiancee. The dad just ran away with him after he recieved the dowelery thingie..

Yik!

Poor Ranma. He really is living his worst nightmare, he sees his curse as the thing that strips away what he is, this make him feel like SHE is stripping more away from what he is.

I'm worried about what Ranma might do and what might happen when and if he tries to change back. I hate to put them through it, but she should just take a 'test' to find out if it's happened or not.

hey! no fair! you have to continue this _

this seems like a really funny story, but you gotta continue! do a sequal, continue this whatever! KEEP GOING _

..*puppy dog eyes* pwease?

You know... Nabiki could have taken it that pig-boy raped Ranma...

That's iot? That's whole story? ... not really the best, but not the worst I've read...

Why didn't Ranma try and change back? The entire

time he was worried abought being stuck as a female,

yet not once did he even try and change back to male?

That makes no sense. Of course Kasumi doing something

like that to Ranma makes no sense either. It really

hit him in a vulnerable spot. If you can find

a way to justify that it would be a lot funnier!

Best you end it there, as otherwise, the biggest despair blast ever would have demolished the whole damn town!

Later. :)

Author's note

Opps, that big spoiler warning that is a review or 2 down was suspose to go on a different story of mine, but it actually works here as well because there are some spoilers in the reviews below.

Sorry about the big annoying post

I could have sworn you'd already posted these previously? Anyway still very amusing read.

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Katsuki Michiru: Sometimes, I'm glad I don't live in Japan. I'd be embarrased my 'coming of age'.

I liked your story, usually I don't read this kinda stuff. I liked it anyway. _

Heh...A fanfic author going by the pen name Ukyo Kounji wrote an award winning short fic called "Red Beans and Rice" have you ever read it? It's quite good. Oh. I'm NOT accusing you of plagarism by the way. Your stories are quite different. I just thought it funny you bringing that tradition forward in your story.

Overall this story has been pretty good. I'd like to see more. I find these pyschological type stories to be quite entertaining if done right and your hitting the mark so far. Thanks

Not too shabby. I'd read this one before, and like the improvements, although...

I did find it rather disheartening that there was a complete lack of understanding and sympathy for Ranma's UNIQUE position.

Nabiki, while recognizing that the event was serious (at least to Ranma), possessed no sympathy whatsoever and actually seemed to take delight in the mental and emotional suffering that Ranma-chan was experiencing.

And Kasumi? Okay, I can easily see her as being a secretive meddler, but... C'mon, her idea of helping Ranma-chan is to announce her new condition to the entire world? When Ranma's blatantly doing everything she can to keep it a secret? That would not only be thoughtless, but like you've cast Nabiki, deliberately cruel and malicious.

Still, overall, I suppose that this story would fit in easily with the canon universe, wherein NO-ONE ever considers the consequences of their actions... especially, if Ranma is the one that would be harmed by them.

Based on this story, I couldn't see Ranma as EVER trusting ANY of the Tendos EVER again, with ANYTHING!

Ugh. Good story, I can see where this is going... but you almost completely ruined the story for me with that Akane is the true fiancee bit at the beginning. Completely un-necessary. Both Akane and Ukyo's engagements are identical in terms of honor and legalities, as dowries had been given in both (the cart and the dojo, respectively.) Say whatever you want about Shampoo's "engagement," but please don't refer to Akane's engagement as the "true" one, it makes me sick.

LOL... I LIKE... FOLLOW UP SOON PLEASE?