awww! this was lovely! x3

Aww it was so cute. I could actually picture it in my mind. Good Job!

well well another great story you have written. i liked this one alot so keep up the good work! :) :P D

not that bad... very good...

Hey, this is good! I like Clifa stories (Oh, thanks for telling me to visit the FF7 forom board, I did learn something...I'm gonna stick to writting romance fics, as I think I'm better at it than writing humor! Thanks a bunch! _)

Aloha. Very sweet little story. Keep up the good work and be kind and

read some of mine. Mahalo.

Well said, erm written...whatever! Cloud and Tifa forever! Keep it up!

cant read it now. Just wanted to say cool pic

This fic was going along fine until you brought in the Yuffie\Reno bit. Man, I hate Reno, he's a ing fag! That just ruined the whole god damn fic!...Okay, so that's enough ranting for a short story...sorry if I offended anybody...

What do you mean you can't write romance? I loved this story!

Um. You don't have any question marks behind the questions. But it was ok.

thanx for your review. I love clud and tifa and I thought the picnic idea was just sweet!

That wasn't so bad considering you claim you can't write romance

awww...how cute, I think you do romance fine, tho you're not the best at *ahem* editing, hehehe. *evil smirk* It's not MY fault! Anyhoo, I think it was about time, right people? I can't wait for the next one and I know what the last line means cuz I am the all powerful editor! HAHAHA!

Hey, i liked it alot. I think you're doing great so keep it up ok? _