To be honest, I don't like Taki. In my fics, she is usually responsible for ruining some aspect of some character's life. I think she's mean and evil, but I like how you're portraying her (which isn't that way).

I have no clue where you pulled the idea for this pairing from. But it's a good one. If you can kill all the Mi-na x Kilik and Xianghua x Kilik fans. *^^*;; I hope you get some inspiration and decide to continue this.

Nya... so sad... so... depressing. But very accurate, I think! That's probably what exactly happened that day! Poor Kilik.

But nicely written. And stuff. Okies. Bye.

Well it's about time you got this chapter done! Just kidding. Seriously, though, I love your story. The characters are believable, the plot is as well, and also, the way you have with words astonds me. Keep writing, and get this next chapter out soon!

That was a great story. Please try and e-mail me when you up-date. Inthe next chap. mybe you could put something along the lines of Kilik going nuts in rage and leaves on a killing spree to kill the one who did all that. Just suggesting.Bye!

Kick ** story! More please!

Kick ** story! More please!

it was so beautiful! poor kilik! loved it, keep it up

Well i never would have think of reading a fic with a Kilik and Taki pairing!! I think it's very unsual 'cos many people would have paired Kilik up with Xianghua. Very nicely put. Carry on with the good work and please update.

Please keep writing, I'm hooked.

Continue! Now! Or you shall feel the wrath of the Pythagoream Theorem and it's ties to the Home and Garden Network!

-clears throat-

Love,
kagura

Interesting preview, well-written. Looking forward to more.

Interesting. If I read the summary right, you're pairing Taki with Kilik. Makes more sense than the seemingly endless number of Taki/Mitsurugi fics I've seen. (Reason: Mitsurugi is a samurai. Ninja hate samurai. Taki would be more likely to cut his throat than fall in love with him.)

Wow. You never cease to amaze me. This story was incredible, and I can't wait for more. A few things I noticed, though, but if you wish, I'll tell you them in an e-mail. This story is great. Continue, please!

Kool story! plz continue! and hurry up soon cuz once again thisis a cool story, (umm...sry i just want to take up space ^^)