Yup, again you show you do have a talent for the short stories! Keep up the good work!

Aww.. that was cute!

-Ahria

Great story as always and thanks for reviewing mine!

Ja ne,

Sonia

/pokes at all other slayers writers/ see? /beams and points at this fic/ we need more like these! Kawaii fics about just randomness fluffy stuff (I love those words). /looks at writer as if she just noticed them/ Yes it is awsome! I like it .

I liked it. It was simple, but rather cute. I don't reall see Xellos reacting that way to someone else than Lina, but that's just a little nitpick.

Zelgadis and Amelia are one of the best anime pairings!

that was really cute

Heh, that was really cute. And ya gotta love Xellos-I thought you did him particularly well. _ Nice to toss in some issues from the show that don't get enough attention (who made Lina the main character anyway ;p )

This was a very cute take on the challenge. It's just how I like it. Not too mushy, but sweet enough to go "AWW!". Nice work! _

Huzzah for story challenges. XD It feels good to actually make one up, you should try it sometime.

Kawaii _! I thought you integrated it very smoothly. And they're all in character... and the writing's good. . . *grin* although I'm not sure Xellos would've been that easy to get rid of (though I'm glad he was #_#)

That was so good! That didn't sound forced at all! I loved it! You should write more like that!

Alandra: sich a sweath AZ moment.

Maliska: and of course Xellos has to ruin it.

Sunny: to bad that Xellos ran before Amelia and Zel could cast their spell.

Ramon: will there be more chapters in thi fic?