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Sage the SongWriter
2008-06-22
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant! Update Soon! :D
Stephie
2006-06-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww how sweet! I always thought those two should be together. You did a great job of capturing Penny. I can see it, even.

Main thing is, I love the ending. It's simple, but so applicable, and really really good. You didn't try anything overly complicated. You just stuck with her. Nice work, girl.

Yhe only thing, and it's not even a problem, but I can be grammar obsessive, but I must point out in the line:

"Too long for what, Penny? To long for what?"

I was unsure as to whether either A) you were trying to make a clever remark with a repition of same words with different meanings, or B) a simple typo, as in, 'too long' vs 'to long'.

Overall, Good job.

~Stephie
Brutal Moonshine
2005-12-10
ch 1,
abuseits really good update soon like this year tho

~Al
rock'n'rollbitch
2005-08-23
ch 1,
abuseits all happening ...

good job , simple to the point , and touching ..in a carefree sort of way ;) just like Penny Laner herself.

loved it , and as an avid Almost Famous fan ...well done.

-Rock and Roll **
areku kuroikokora
2005-07-29
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE IT! ..And I love the movie so it's the best of both worlds and shes practically in some ways my role model...
Awesome job!
Gohan-Kun Shin
2005-07-05
ch 1,
abuseawesome..i absoloutely love this movie and you did a good job on this fic
Simoman
2005-04-04
ch 1,
abuseGood story. Please continue!
Johanna
2005-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseOkay..I need MORE.

What happened there?

Did William and Penny actually go there?

mrfpgh. And what did they eat? Did they meet a band there?
Katie
2004-12-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseYay, finally an Almost Famous story. Its my favourite movie and i'm glad someone is writing about it. Your story is great so far. Keep it up.
janesparrow
2004-11-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseSoo good! I love Almost Famous, and I want you to continue with this story! It rocks! I love William, and Penny. Please keep writing!
clairebear
2004-11-07
ch 1, anon.
abusealmost famous being my fave movie aswell, i know a lot about it. i thought your story was fantastic. you write well.i'll be honest i didnt think any almost famous story could live up to my expectations (how could it be as good as the movie), but yours came pretty close to it. please write some more, i need another dose of Penny Lane and William Miller.
i loved it , write more. from clairebear.
you are an aspiring actor just like young william.
Pagefan
2004-10-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is a nice start. Almost Famous is probably one of my favorite movies, and Penny Lane is really great character, full of mystery. Keep this going and I'll keep reading!
crazybeef
2004-10-19
ch 1,
abuseHey! That was great. I hope you write more, because "Almost Famous" is my favorite movie and I've always wanted to read AF fanfic.
~*~Person~*~
2004-10-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it, write more, plz...
ThePuKaPrincess
2004-10-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey! its good so far... i dont think you have quite captured penny but its good. the end, LOVE IT! I think it would be cool if you did it in journals that explained everything. ok bye now. looking forward to the next chapter
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