Beautifully it!E/O FOREVERRRRR!

really enjoyed, i like el's thoughts on liv's to read the second

i could not find the sequel please help me i really loved it

wow. that was so good. i want to find the sequel! that was so awesome! great writing.

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I loved it. Can you please update. I wonder if he'll go back to Olivia and she'll take him. Please UPDATE!

nice story!

hey, i really liked the story. nice work. keep it up!

Interesting angle, I just don't like stories where the guy cheats on his wife. But I like your emotional reasoning for it. Well written

Very very nice. I love that you added a sequel to this! :) Keep up the great work.

Yea! A sequel. You did fine with the guys point of view. At least a sensitive guy (Elliot's sensitive right?). Although I'm a girl too so what do I know.

I don't really read much L&O:SVU fanfic, but I stumbled upon yours and let me tell you, this was very well written. It's probably the first time I've ever contemplated a relationship between these two without completely hating Elliot for cheating on his wife. I mean, I still don't condone him cheating (or Olivia for leading him into it), but your masterful insight helped me to see how it might happen and gave me a situation in which it wouldn't be as bad as it would be otherwise. Anyway, just thought I'd let you know that I liked it. :)

Hey, this is really good! Keep writing, it reall portays emotions well!

HAWT! _

This is an amazing story. The descriptions and explanations were well written.

i love it! you should make a story from it!