Perhaps an explanation of the "new" cards in the story might be in order. (Ditto for chapter 4 if any)

Otherwise, nice story. Can't wait for chapter 6.

Wow this is getting great!I haven't read it in a

long time.I really like it.Update soon.Ksaturn

This is your first Yu-gi-oh fic?Pretty cool.I

like this.Yu-gi-oh rock's.Update soon!

Ksaturn