Only two dead guys, Angel? You do surprise me. What happened to Kain? Or don't I want to know? ^_^ Well, I certainly sympathized with your poor narrator. That is one very uncomfortable situation she's got herself into, and one which I'm fairly familiar with myself. I did enjoy your descriptions of a typical male sulk. Obviously being dead doesn't lessen their capacity for doing that! Pity.

Hm. I'm not sure what I think about this. It's funny - and yeah, that's divided between "strange" and "ha-ha." Well-written, but your Haldir seems odd to me.

Strange situation for him, I know. Still. This story is like the last one with him ... well-written, and I think it's good, but I'm not sure if I like it. Or at least, I'm not sure that I like him.

On the other hand, I do like your Raziel, and the puppy-dog bit was cute. =) I feel for the poor guy, too.

LOL!! Poor Raz being stuck with that elf... Oh well! I have some of the same issues with my dead boys (but none of them clean). Continue?

*blank stare* Who's Haldir? Wow, that was rambling, but interesting. I've got to figure out how you do that. I'm going to skip over the comments on how English culture seems cute to me.

Your narrator is a bit psychotic. :) Living with dead people and being worried about intellegent mold indeed. I always think that it's a bit weird, that Razzy likes things like peanut butter and waffles. *dismisses the thought with a twitch*