love the story...hope that there is more to it...cause i really want to know what happens... :)

Fantastic story hope you update!

update soon

What a great fic. Please, write more soon.

great story! I wish you'd post the next chapter.

please write more

sorry for the lateness of this review but i thought it was great the emotion and intensity between Emma and Brennan is great you captured it perfectly i hope you plan to finish because it's truly good.

This is the best story please keep writing!

Geez, u just had to end the chapter when things r geting interesting. Update soon, please...

You are so evil, leaving it just when things were getting good. Defintely need more E/B goodness. Write more soon.

really god story i would go into that cheap motel with those "weird women" outside

i love it keep writing

loved it can't wait to read lots more

haha, i know what you mean... down with school and all its wretched paper works! haha...

anyway... another nice chapter... the tension between the two is really going bizerk... haha... can't wait what'll happen... and dinner? huh? what kind of excuse is that? really, Emma's panicking, i see... no wonder she can't think straight... haha! tnx for d update! it was so cool!

OMG! I really like this chapter. You are really working the tenssion in this fic between Brennan and Emma. That's really good, you leave the readers guessing of what could possibly happen next. Just please say that it's going to be a happy ending with Brennan and Emma together at the end. Well, anywho... please up date soon. I really look forward to your next chapter. Up date soon. Thanks. Later Days.

Hi !

I reall really like that chapter !

You describe very well their feelings and their actions !

Great job !

More soon please !

Megara1