|Reviews for Black Star|
| Le Petite Chef M 12/20/05 . chapter 1
Good story but one thing: GRAMMER AND SPELLING! Do you use spell check! God, it's the one thing I can't stand when people don't! And if you do, just check over it one more time or have someone edit it for you, it'll turn out better.
Other than that, I liked it very much. I would be happy to edit for you if you need an editor. E-mail
| MistressCoCoLoVeR 9/27/04 . chapter 1