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| kirallie 2008-06-17 ch 11, | abuseIs SPeed right? ALmost feel sorry for Ryan. Mean Speed! Will he manifest for anyone else? Keep up the great work! |
| Bacard 2007-09-26 ch 11, | abuseI assume this story won’t be updated. It’s sad, because this story was one of my main reason to join to this site. I think you know what a good job you did with this fic, how well-written it is, how much the plot is intriguing, and interesting, and what CSI:M-fans needed after “Lost Son”. So I won’t repeat it. OK, maybe I should emphasise that part with the plot: It’s an incredibly interesting plot, and I think this is the rarest thing in fanfiction, because it’s hard to be original, when your base is not. But you did, and this plotline would be simply perfect even for an unconventional CSI:M spinoff, or an original show. Yeah, anyone can dream. And this fic, in this state, unfinished, after these years (because two is plural), still has its place on my favourite’s list. (And I leave it on my Alert list, because hope dies last, or something like that.) Incredibly good job, but it’s a pity, it’s dropped. |
| NikaDawson 2007-09-21 ch 11, | abuseI know this hasn't been updated in a while, but it's a great story. Just wondering if it's ever going to be updated. |
| DieLikeTheStars 2007-01-26 ch 11, | abusethis fan fic is so good, i cant believe speed is messing with ryan lol. cant wait till the next update!! |
| Nooka 2006-10-10 ch 11, | abuseHey this was just getting interesting! How come you haven't updated it in ages? |
| Ldinka 2006-05-05 ch 11, | abuseok another story without ending why? |
| FallenAngel 2005-12-03 ch 11, | abuseOkay, you gave me a great beginning of second year of college present, it was awesome, two days before skool new chap! YAY! Please please please update, it's finals now, and I need another present! Pwease. |
| Sanqhian 2005-11-28 ch 11, | abuseHey, this is really great. I love the idea and the way you write. I really love this story and can't wait for you to update! Sanqhian |
| ladyhurt 2005-09-17 ch 11, | abuseOh, man...wicked, absolutely wicked! I finally got a chance to read this update, and its been so long! *sniff* but I'm SO happy you're continuing... Anyway, this was a great chapter. I'm really curious as to where you're taking this, but after this one with the whole body-deprived plotline, I'm thinking maybe Speed is going to make a miraculous re-entrance into the world of the living? *cheeky grin* Love it, love it, please update again kthx, etc. Arielle |
| Sillie 2005-09-16 ch 11, | abuseBody deprived hmm? Heh, continue soon, okay? |
| Melle 2005-09-09 ch 11, | abusehi I'm from Germany and Speed died here on tuesday :-( I was so sad, but this story is really like a therapy for me! So, please update soon!I LOVE it ^^ |
| broken-angel-gurl 2005-09-05 ch 11, | abuseOMG...everytime i think i'm going to give up on this story you go and write another chapter...and it makes me fall in love with it all over again...juss plz plz plz update soon. you can't just leave it there. so plz plz plz update soon... |
| Lenora 2005-09-05 ch 11, | abuse...body deprived? *is confused* please update soon...i wanna know what happens next! more more more more more! |
| NaughtyKittyKat 2005-09-05 ch 11, | abuseCool. This is just so cool. Body-deprieved. Wow. Please, don't make me wait so long for the next chapter, again! *puppydogeyes* |
| Demon Faith 2005-09-05 ch 11, | abuseOh, wow. Mean Speed, but I don't know Ryan, so I don't really care what Speed does to him. And ooh on the theory - I want Speed to come back! |