"good morning, Tezuka."
...
"Fuji."

I love this part so much. you can put the whole emotion in you whole fic wth that three words. Tezuka's "fuji." (I imagine they are short, cold but somehow choked) so beautiful.
Great job!

Oh that was beautifully written...I adore the words you used, they're so Tezuka-nesque, they fit the character, the emotion, the story so perfectly...
But enlighten me on this one...Tezuka admits he's fallen for Fuji, but he doesn't want to confess? Because he's afraid? Of rejection? What did he mean when he said "adjacent"? Close but not THAT close?

Look at what you've done...you're racking my brains...

Wow, this was really impressive. I could definitely see Tezuka looking at his relationship with Fuji like that. And I think you and angst should become BFFs, because that was some of the best angst I've ever read. It was thought-provoking and gloomy, but it had a hopeful undertone at the same time, which made it perfect. Really amazing!

This was angsty. Very angsty. So sad. Yet so very beautiful!!
Nice job! I loved reading it!

Huggies
Kana

aw...it is really sad, but well written =) haha im the type that never confesses either xD

oh my gosh that was WOW great job on tezukas pov. he can be so drab ne? :3

AWESOME b>.

yoshikochan does not need to be shot! I like your stories, I really do! I just realized where I'd seen your name before, too! I go to your tenipuri site like...religiously. n.n nifty little things you learn sometimes, huh?

Aw, very cute. It is all very acuret as well! Very good! I applaud you! ^_^

CUTE !! *glomps yoshikochan* I love the way your Tezuka thinks ^^. I love the way he compares himself to Fuji. *bounces happily* Such an amazing job! Write more ^^

BAKA! Upsmacks back of your head with tennis racket. Sucks? bad? Excuse me, but by the Hikari that was damn GOOD! It was very well written and you have amazing talent! Don't you go beating youeself up like that!! Gr...

That was sad. Maybe happy fanfics will cure me before I start crying and thinking about their lives and mine. *tears are welling in her eyes* Can't Tezuka just...just...I give up. *walks away into the distance. A sad,lonely figure walks into the horizon crying* It's not that sad though! *U hear crying noises- WAAH!* U should read "The Lost Soul" by Cenz. I was really crying. My friend was sitting beside me and she had to hand me a tissue.

No! You must not be shot! But yes, I will shoot you if you don't write more tezufuji-ness. *hearts* This was really a nice read, you know. ^^

can't believe am saying this, but poor buchou.. trapped in his own cage. hope you'll write sth abt him being more outspoken abt his feelings for fuji next time. good work!

mori! ^^

no... yoshikochan should not be shot... you should be... glomped!
*glomp* XD
Hey, I loved this piece. I've also always felt that Tezuka and Fuji stand in that pedestal, like their own world that no one else can enter... or rather, no one else is capable of doing so. You've described their feelings so well. I love Tezuka monologues about Fuji... I do I do! XD
...shall look forward to more ;)

aw!! you're so meeaan T_T
neh.. that was such a good fic. i'm sad.. you're evil >.< u shud write more!!