I. Love. This fanfic. It's an amazingly new twist on something fairly overdone, with the different flavors and points-of-view and... aw. I love it. Each POV is great and I worship you now. Keep it up!

Best Trigun introspection I've seen yet... I especially liked the bit about "that big cross that he *shoots* people with." I hope you can keep up the pace with Wolfwood. By the way, what flavor will he be? Chocolate? Black Cherry? Tar?

Excellent fic. Both chapters are well-written and in-character, and make some interesting points about Milly's character. I especially like the way they reflect upon Vash and Meryl themselves, as well as on Wolfwood. Great job! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

This is absolutely great. I'm always surprised to see such great work at , because I'm used to finding only worthless spam here.

THANK YOU for writing this, and I will now hug you. *hug* So I'm not one of the only Milly writers around.

I really like. Are you on livejournal? I think I will friend you

aw, i love this. you've captured them so well. i can't wait to see what you'll do with Wolfwood.

Very nice. Very impressive. There's not much around here at the moment that's good to read, but this is good. I love Millie as a character and she's so under appreciated or, when she is done, she's done quite badly. This shows some wonderful characterisation. You've got Millie, Vash, and Meryl down very well. Next, I'm guessing, is Wolfwood. Which I'm actually looking forward to. It sounds like you're not going to neglect his lighter, flirty side, which is always good. Too many concentrate purely on Angst Wolfwood which, whilst fun, it'nt all of the story.

I think that, after you've done this, you should write a Millie chapter or something about the others, that'd be fun.

I love characterisation peaces like this, and this impressed me quite a lot. Nicely done.

I can't put it into words it's that good. Not bad at all.

too lazy to sign in. Meh.

Yay! This made me so happy! The semi stream of consiousness Vash mulling the paradox that is Milly Thompson. Even though you claim you don't have much experience writing Vash, I say you did a very good job! I think there are some tense shift problems, though, and you might want to re-read it aloud to see. Just to check, okay?

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter of this AND Simplicity. You know, all you did was make more work for yourself. _