Hey! This sounded pretty good, I was especially freaked out when you talked about Dudley being dead x3 Anyway, I think you need to put in some more description, and why is this rated K+? I think maybe one or two steps up if you're going to be talking about people being stabbed and stuff. Anyway, good start.

tis cool. i like it. i thought at the beginning that it was harry who was swooping through the window. i was quite confuzzled.

Hey, that's funny! I was almost conviced J.K. Rowling wrote that...your style is very similar(which, when writing fanfic, is a very positive thing!) Thanks for your reviews! P.S. Close!

um... right... whatever floats your boat I guess...

A vey gripping story!! With a great twist at the end. I totaly didn't expect that! Very good overall!

do you want ideas for what to happen next?
Have some romance in it at some point.
and less about harry. more about girls.
really good start though.
I know you don't really want reviews though do you?
spanna

ok, so its me again. This is cool, is it going anywhere?
Tried to join your c2 thingy, but think i did it wrong. How do you become a staff member?

quite interesting...i'm very intrigued. i hope you decide to continue, cause this is a fantastic start!

Sasha

a very unexpected twist...i was really expecting a death eater or Lord Volemort but that really made it interesting, i hope you continue writing this...you have set up a good begining!
*scotgurl*