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| huskers2 2008-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWell, most of it would be a bit confusing, but the bastard is quite obviously Draco Malfoy. |
| Mondkalb 2008-08-11 ch 21, | abusea really wonderful sequel hmm Severus he is still kinda enigma isnt he? but I like him that way xD Mondy |
| Jimbocous 2008-05-14 ch 21, | abuseThanks for another great read! |
| bookish327 2008-01-28 ch 21, | abuse(This review is for the entire story, not just this chapter.) I really, really enjoyed this story. I love how you wrote Harry, Ginny, Ron, Mione, everyone. You showed all of their loving, courageous, honor-filled qualities, yet we also were able to see their humor (e.g., the "merry-go-round" line from Ron, even though he was asleep when he said it) and individual uniquenesses. I also loved the idea of them all living together at Potter Manor, even if it was because of the danger they were facing. It reminded me a little of ORDER OF THE PHOENIX when the Weasleys, Harry, and Hermione were living at Grimmauld Place with Sirius. With the Order members coming and going and all of the people living there, it had a few things in common with Potter Manor in this universe. I'm a sucker for fan fic's where the Weasleys (and Harry, Hermione, and all of the assorted in-laws and family friends) get together for any good reason (i.e., any occasion that doesn't have to do with someone's death or serious injury). Hence, I really enjoyed all of the family togetherness that occurred in this story. I also enjoyed seeing Harry in action as Minister and head of the Order. He's such a good leader. It may tear him up to always feel so responsible for everyone and everything (especially when people are hurt or killed), but that's part of what makes him a good choice to lead others. He cares about everyone and will never take the loss of life lightly. I wish we could have known the sex and name of the eighth Potter child, and those of the Ron/Mione twins, but you can't have everything, I guess . . . . Also, it would be fun to know how many more Potters WOULD be born, since they could keep pro-creating into the double digits, at this rate. :) Would Ron & Mione ever catch up with them? Probably not; Harry & Ginny have too much of a head-start on them. The extravagance that Harry put into their twins' birthday celebration almost makes one think of those which he witnessed growing up in Surrey, but never received himself from his aunt & uncle. Luckily, this is a whole different situation, and his kids would never be allowed to bullying, spoiled brats. Anyway, it was adorable how excited Harry was about everything to do with this birthday party, and Ginny's reaction to the dog was hilarious. Like Mione said, I can't see Ginny not falling in love with the dog, too, with her loving heart. That leads my imagination to another interesting thought: what would they name the dog? Hm . . . . So many creative possibilities. :) I also really enjoyed Severus relationship with the family, and I especially liked his conversations with Harry in Harry's study. They were humorous, as well as insightful. I liked how they relationship had evolved over time, and how Severus apologized to Harry for how he had treated him as a child. That was really mature of him to see that and then also be able to express it to Harry. Excellent story! I plan to read more of your work, even if there is no more dealing with this particular universe. (If you were to write more for this universe, I'd be first in line to read them, though. Don't worry that the final books might make some things Alternate Universe in your story now. What you wrote was close enough to canon and so well-written and thought-out that it wouldn't matter about any deviations from the books now. Anyway, this universe is already AU because of the books and movies from the Harry Potter series being heavily referred to as part of the storyline. Hence, if you wanted to, there's no reason NOT to write more for this universe. Please? Think about it?) Thank you for writing this wonderful story. |
| kaededainecalwyn 2006-09-22 ch 21, | abuseWow, another heart and mind breaker and now I have extra officially decided that you are brilliant and deserved to be praised as much and J.K. Rowling is. Yeah, my contribution to this owrld and I really, really, really liked you story... ies. KDC^or^Liz-E |
| MssrBlaze 2006-02-12 ch 21, | abuseThis story was equally as good as it's predescessor. Although, I would have enjoyed reading about the babies that weren't born...Any way, It was great. Were Malcoms children showing any magical powers? Is that why Marion asked if it could be shown by fixing broken things?? I never would have suspected wormtail as the Dark Lord, but I did have an inkling that Severus would try to sacrefice himself. Good Job. Blaze |
| broken.wings. 2006-01-02 ch 21, anon. | abuseWow...what an ending! I love the last couple of lines about Harry regaining his hope. I wanted to see a little bit more of the minor characters, but this has its own perfection-everyone gathered together as they should be. I love your stories. Continue writing! |
| broken.wings. 2006-01-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseMalcolm huh? Interesting name for Dudley, but I can't picture him any other way. I'm loving Ramona by the way... |
| harrypassion 2005-09-09 ch 21, | abusegreat story with a twist at the end. |
| Black is the New Pink 2005-09-04 ch 21, | abuseThat was a good story. I liked it. I didn't think that Harry was going to die. I didn't want him too. I had a sneaking feeling it would be Snape...I was right! Defy Gravity |
| Strangely Sirius 2005-08-20 ch 21, | abuseAH! SO GOOD! *dies from the goodness of it all* You completely had me believing that Snape had betrayed them! And then Wormtail turned out to be the sicko bastard we all know he is! AND THE FLUFF! Too good, too good. |
| rgluvr13 2005-08-04 ch 21, | abuseWow. Wormtail is an evil turd. lol. Once agn u suprise me and I luv it! Looking forward to new fics...~mione~ |
| BasketKiwi 2005-07-26 ch 21, | abuseHee-hee. Very good story. Sorry, but I can just picture Snape hitting students over the head with his cane. "You incompetent fools!" WHACK! hee-hee. All old and decrepit. Anyway, very good job. Though it was kinda sad at a lot of parts. Poor Harry. But I'm glad you didn't kill off Snape or Harry or any of the main-main characters. (Well, the good ones anyway.) ;) DIE WORMTAIL!... |
| Andi 2005-07-07 ch 21, anon. | abuseHurray for Snape!! thought the prophesy could mean him - but was definitely happy to find him still alive in the end! Great story:) |
| andi 2005-07-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseWeasleys rule the world!!:) lol - at least life will never be boring!:) |