Ah, I'm not quite sure why, but this left me feeling terribly excited at the end. I even marked lines I liked. The- well- the text in general was really unique (to me?), and I could only imagine this as a cartoon. Ay, Stalingrad. I enjoyed your beginning, and your ending, and your voice. I like your voice. Is it just in this, speaking of Genome Training, or is it how you always write? I suppose I'll have to read more stories to find out.
And I learned. Reading this, I learned more than I...have in a long time?, and was regretfully reminded of physics. Nyeurgh.

Don't you think this is somewhat extreme subterfuge for skirting the nonfiction rules? Subreality and all that to just give a few instructions?