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| GERHDFGN 2006-10-03 ch 3, | abuseoh oh oh poor squall, oh this is so exciting i really wanna know what happens next i the story, this is really really good, keep it up luv Faina |
| elf grrl 2006-03-18 ch 3, | abusehey!! UPDATE! i am so addicted, this was so perfect damn it! Lol, loved it so much, honestly! LoL |
| Althea17 2004-11-11 ch 3, | abuseVery nice! Can't wait to read the next chapter. UPDATE SOON! |
| Valkyrie Wilde 2004-11-07 ch 2, | abuseBeautifully done! I like to story line. It seems very interesting. It's sweet in its own sadistic way. Personalities are captured very well and the internal dialoge is so realistic. And thank BOB for Seifer and Squall becuase I dislike Rinoa. Please continue! |
| Shine 2004-11-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love this plot! |
| Princess Iria 2004-09-22 ch 3, | abuseGood job so far! I really like how each part connects loosely to the others. I especially liked that last bit about the fight scene. Even though that part is the most overused scene in FFVI fiction, you write it your own way and it fits well with the rest you've written so far. Keep it up! |
| hollyholly601 2004-09-22 ch 3, | abuseI usually hate slash, but that was good. Continue it! |
| Chrissy Almasy 2004-09-22 ch 3, | abusePromising! I like your style very much. And you're really getting your fingers behind the depth of that rivalry. Makes me curious for the rest! |
| randomsomeone 2004-09-21 ch 1, | abuseTee hee! *stabbystabbystabstab* (In a friendly way) |