Very good story! It was funny how they bought the books and bookmarks with the titles and colors that represented themselves. That was really awesome!

Love Hakkai! Loved the story! Putting it on my fav stories! Nuff said!

Cute story. ^^; I can imagine them trying to go shopping for a present and just picking up something based on a cover (because I do almost the same thing).

Your paragraphing and random smileys threw me off at times, though.

Hehehe sweet little birthday fic ^_^

Very cute. Personalities are good, storyline is great, fic is fantastic.

kawaii... funny... had nice time reading...^_^

Hehehe, nice any humourous. Got to love Sanzo and Hakkai. ^__^ Thanks for sharing!

eheheh, how sweet! Sanzo giving Hakkai a gift... *has warm fuzzies* I should hope the boys would be considerate enough to remember a birthday. I like the bookmark's symbolism too; the subconscious is fascinating ::in a Spock-ish voice::

I didn't realize it was Hakkai's birthday :/