Beautiful. This is without doubt one of the best stories I have read on The only problem is the occasional typo. Other than that, Try posting this on Again, beautiful and tearjerking.

Aww that story was so sad .. it was still good though ... I bet he got rich off perls :)

It's a good story, ZejiHydra, yet you need to find replacements for the "iK"s roaming about. (I believe they are supposed to be either commas or other punctuation, yes?)

In the beginning, "..., just like a little children." needs to be changed for number agreement. (children needs to be child.)

I enjoyed it.

BOGWarrior

That was scary

It was like the corny old story about a psycho whacking a girls boyfriends head onto the roof of her car while she's inside. He doesn't realise it's wrong, only here the girl is helping it! Did she hear about it killing children? Anyway great story

bribery...

i didn't think the zerg would even have that kind of instinct to want to be healed