Oh, that was so sad :'( You are so good at conveying emotions in your writing, really. The music you've kind of set thes story to is so fitting. Great job :)

That was beautiful.

i don't care how long ago this was written or the fact that i've read this before... this was truly amazing.. my little shipper heart is all warm and tingly...

wow.. err.. that was very very very well-written. in the first chapter when max first goes into the apartment it was like an exact moment out of an episode word for word you had the characterization downpact. and chapter two so full of beautiful emotional imagery, i loved your descriptions of their soulful eyes. again thanks for such a beautiful story!

Very well written - true to the characters. I love the idea of a dance as a metaphor for their relationship. Going down as one of my favorites !

Pure beautiful shippiness. Excellent writing

aquila, don't stop now-please continue this story! i really enjoy M/L shippiness/romance with angst.

more? a sequel? yeah both!

plese sir/ma'dam i won't some more

How did you find my favorite song? *eerie shudder* What a great piece of work! Thank you!

That was absolutely beautiful! I loved it. *shipper sigh* - Cassie

Wonderful!

Very good. You have talent. Just try to describe Logan's motions.

Happy, sappy sigh... this was great! I could see this happening.

ok i'm gonna try this they haven't been letting me post a review! :) but Aquila you are my fav author! this was great! maybe a sequel or continuation! great job!